Comments | writing_samsara: [POTC crack!fic] - "Captain of Love" - romance cliche fic for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/djarum99">djarum99</a></strong>

writing_samsara

[POTC crack!fic] - "Captain of Love" - romance cliche fic for djarum99 - rated NC-17

Jul 09, 2007 02:12

Prompt: From
( Read more... )

Comments 24

lady_di75 July 9 2007, 11:55:45 UTC

Oh that was just bloody AWFUL... "valley of love"?!? "love-grotto"?!?!
I can't believe I read this before I had my coffee... LOL... What is it they say, laugh before breakfast and you'll cry before supper?

An excellent job of very cheesy writing, my dear ;) And I must agree with Erinya -- this is better than most romance novels I've had the misfortune to pick up. But I may never be able to read serious J/E smut without thinking of his "quivering love rod" again...

writing_samsara July 9 2007, 14:10:15 UTC

Thank you so much for weathering the bad!fic and having a laugh, love!

"What is it they say, laugh before breakfast and you'll cry before supper?"
--- Oh no, I have doomed us all! *swoons* Save us, oh Captain of Looooove! *giggles*

Thanks so much for appreciating my cheese, darlin! I'm still horrified that there are actual published novels that read worse than this, but hey, maybe that means I'll actually have a chance at getting published some day. *g*

*off to work - and daydream of Jack's man-love and Elizabeth's grotto-of-get-down*

penknife July 9 2007, 12:08:19 UTC

Oh, my! This was hilarious. For some reason, I'm particularly taken with MarySue!Elizabeth fretting about the perfection of her cooking.

writing_samsara July 9 2007, 14:12:04 UTC

Thanks so much for reading, love! *g* I'm so glad that you found this funny, and that the cooking bit gave you a chortle. God knows, it was hard to write about the sanctity of her table without cracking up.

penknife July 9 2007, 14:13:46 UTC

I would be surprised if Elizabeth can boil water.

versifico July 9 2007, 13:21:34 UTC

HA! That was absolutely perfect. I was lovin' Jack's "rippled chest". Because we all know Jack has a 6 pack *g*

writing_samsara July 9 2007, 14:15:56 UTC

Thanks so much, love! I'm so glad that you had a bit of fun reading this. And oh Lordy, you know Jack's six-pack would look like a sketch of He-Man. *g*

cmgacrux July 9 2007, 13:41:08 UTC

Jack’s quivering love-rod -- LOL!

It must have been hard for you to write this, but you did great. "Captain of Love" is hilarious and very clichéd. Well done, darling. ;)

writing_samsara July 9 2007, 14:20:30 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and for chuckling along! *g* It was a definite challenge to write this, but was a good deal of fun as well.

Thanks again, love! *hugs*

compassrose7577 July 9 2007, 17:19:30 UTC

OMG! This is too special ( ... )