[POTC Holiday Fic] - KotS companion vignette - Myrrh for the King: Part Two - 3/3 - rated R

[writing_samsara]

~Part Two~

The evening had passed colorfully enough. For his part, Jack had spent the better half of the hour before dinner fetching water for his bloody sister. And so he’d found himself making several trips to the well. He’d grumbled a good deal, but the lime juice that Sara had made with said water rendered the labor nearly worthwhile, the

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[lady_di75]

Alright, it has taken me far too long to get this next part read... but I am so glad that I kept coming back to finish.

Sara's voice... I can hear it, it is so melodious and lovely, with its lilt of India in her inflections. What a character you have created in her! I love her.
And the horrible words exchanged, Teague's near-silent patriarchy presiding over it...
And therefore because of your sloppiness and your husband’s naiveté, I gather that I’m lay to about in this purgatory, waiting for the fruit of your indiscretions - or bloody Will’s bumbling ineptitude - all the while veritably rotting in this house with you, just in case your wretched spawn wriggles out before you can summon dear William?
They are horrible to one another, in their pain and their frustration.

So much to love about this... it is gorgeous. I hope to finish part three before summer rolls around!!

[lady_di75]

I hope to finish part three before summer rolls around!!

Alright then... nobody move, I've dropped me brain...

... I'll go read the chapters in the PROPER order, now...