I think this is really good! Hilarious, but good. I'm still picturing the vacant stares of the Melvinites when reading this though. You'll hand them a sheet, and they'll just stare at you, and stare and stare....do you have nightmares about their stares? Haha! Sorry. Ok, so I think this is a very good idea in the first place because old people do better with step-by-step directions, and I think the glossory is a stroke of genius (though you may want to put it in alphabetical order? it seems now it's in order of things being connected to each other, so maybe that actually works better? it's a judgement call i guess
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