Story: "Words for Sale!"

[writingmoments]

"Words for sale! New, fresh, just in from the coast! Words for sale

Comments

[beautyofgrey]

This is so creative! I wish I could think of things like this!

[writingmoments]

I really struggled with the ending. Was it too cliched for you? (seriously, I can work on it until Sat. so input is very helpful)

I think your fiction is more ... real. I really would rather write like you. I write a lot of little fairytale type things. There isn't really a market for these little fluffy things.

[beautyofgrey]

It's a little predictable, but given the style of the tale, I don't think a happy ending is unjustified. I'll have to think on it some more. I had to read it sort of quickly b/c I was making dinner, and I should like to go through it a second time.

[firesign10]

I was sorry about the promise lady, but I loved the whole word-gathering thing!!

[keppiehed]

The whimsy of this was enchanting. I was delighted by first the glimpse of magic, and then the truth behind the creativity. Well done, a story to be very proud of, indeed.

[aquarius_galuxy]

This is really, really awesome! I love the idea of this, and how you've made words something you can hold.

I really liked how you described Penny's mother being in her "dream world of memories", it's very vivid. And the words building a wall too!

And I hope you get less stressed! *hugs*

[lacruciverbiste]

Very, very, very cool idea. Words for sale! Loved it.

Good luck this week. Look forward to reading more from you.
~La Cruciverbiste
BF Week One Entry-"Clothes and all"