What If We Went To Italy (The Libaremente Remix)

[kallistei]

Title: What If We Went To Italy (The Libaremente Remix)
Pairing: Jaejoong/Yunho
Rating: Mature
Word Count: 2355
Summary: Yunho's bride-to-be is beautiful, young and shy - everything she's meant to be and nothing that Yunho wants.
Author's Notes: Written for remixredux09, based on What If We Went To Italy by mormorando. Thanks to ranalore and sleepish for betaing.

Comments

[silkstar8]

Good job on this! I loved your descriptions, especially of the characters, their thoughts, and their actions.

I loved how the last line is ambiguous. When I first read it, I thought it was one of those ghost stories. Now I'm wondering if he dreamed it because Jaejoong ends up helping him in a way that he (Yunho) needed.

[kallistei]

Thank you! I dithered a lot about that line, but it made a lot of things about the story fall into place for me. I'm glad it works for you :)

[dreaminthepast]

Beautiful and moving.

Thank you.

[kallistei]

Thanks for commenting :)

[ara_niey]

ehhh?
the last line makes me confuse.was it all just a dream?while he was waiting for the bus?
or maybe everything did happen,only that the end is a bit ambiguous?..

love this!~♥

[kallistei]

The answer is yes ;) Thank you!

[ara_niey]

yes to which question dear?
the dream one or the real one?^^

[kallistei]

I didn't specify for a reason :)

[riofrio]

you made me read the pairing-i-would-never-like-even-if-it-was-the-last-pairing-on-earth, and i must say it was lovely,,:)

[kallistei]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[bumbisex]

I love this to death. I might in fact marry it and have it's babies, but that's a whole other story.

Lovelovelove. I have no words. And the setting is just...

I'm sorry, I'll need some time to recover before I try my hand at commenting again. ^^;;

[kallistei]

:) Thanks!