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Aug 11, 2005 22:27

jump around the rules of it all until the ceiling falls beyond the walls becomes the floor newly renovated making room for growth new thoughts ideas insight and triumphs rock the casba so hard richter falls from lady liberty and all scales fail in comparison all comparisons fail in each other and the judgement ceases the name calling stops all are ( Read more... )

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Bravo! anonymous August 14 2005, 03:09:45 UTC
Well put message here. I like how you use places or images like Casbah and Lady Liberty to reference the people/countries you're primarily talking about. The opening is very dramatic, almost frantic, but always interesting and certainly slightly radical since it seems to be calling for collapsing the existing structures (at least figuratively, if not literally) and changing the way we think. The ending lightens it up a bit, as if you were afraid it was too serious.

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