"Sever the Ties That Bind Us" -- (Part 01/?) -- Harry Potter, Snarry

[writingpuck]

Fandom: Harry Potter
Title: "Sever the Ties That Bind Us" - Part One
Characters: Harry/Snape, Harry/Ron, Hermione
Words: 2629
Rating: R ((sexuality))
Disclaimer: If it screams of JKR, it's hers. Such a shame.

Notes: While "Sever" follows canon up until Harry's fifth year, it begins to diverge about a month into his school year

Comments

[cobryn]

There are so many fics that have incredibly bad narrative. It's great to see someone actually use literary techniques when writing.

I love how the pacing serves to entice mood with each scene, and you're not afraid to put your vocabulary to use.

The plot's unique, and I love the voice.

My one critique? You still have to write a Harry/Draco after this, you know...

Kudos

[writingpuck]

Thanks tons!

As for the Harry/Draco--- if I cross my fingers maybe an idea will strike, but hopefully not before I finish "Sever." ^^