Sparky

[writings_by_pam]

Author's Note: This is just the start of something. It's what came to me from the brigits_flame  topic of Mechination.

The day I met him, he was searching for a name. He wouldn’t tell me what the name was for, so I helped him blindly. I was the café waitress and he was the man in the corner sipping coffee with a pen in hand. When I approached for his third

Comments

[betweenthelynes]

*nods*
Nice!

I love it when I read and I can see it happen in my head. Thank you for that!
:)

-Leander

[aurumsisters]

Thanks. :) This prompt was one of the more difficult ones for me. :) I like your icon!

[writings_by_pam]

Thanks!

[writings_by_pam]

I always seem to miss the small errors. :(

I do the same thing when names! I write down all the possibilities and then have to pick one. :)

[writingmoments]

It IS an interesting choice:)

That waitress was sweet to pay for his refills:)

You write dialogue very naturally and well.

This sounds like me:

I stood there awkwardly, debating whether or not to sit.

I always have trouble deciding whether it's unfriendly to not sit or too forward to join someone (at a gathering, etc)

[writings_by_pam]

Thanks. I try to picture it in my head - I find that helps me write dialogue.

I would be awkward as well. :)