Blue

[writings_by_pam]

BF  prompt: temptation

Word Count: 423 words

Blue
by: Pamela MacLean
(aurumsisters )

It was a dark and stormy night…

That was all it took for her to slam the book shut. She had been searching through this library for hours, trying to find a good book to read. She had searched through the mysteries first, spending time running her eyes over dozens of

Comments

[darlinleo]

Hi there! Long time no see!

This seems to be setting the tone as very good intro into a longer story, but I have to point out the over usage of "she" in the first two paragraphs. That made the opening a bit too dry, so I had to gnaw my way through it. All the rest was thoroughly enjoyable, though.

Nice to see you again :D

[aurumsisters]

Thanks! Unfortunately, I remembered the deadline shortly before we had to leave for a weekend trip. So, the entry I had planned was a bit rushed and unedited.

Thanks for reading. :)

[kithlyara]

This definitely seems a bit rushed but what you have written is very good. It would make a great start to a longer story. Good luck this week!

[aurumsisters]

Thanks. :)

I may have to play with this one at some point for a longer story. I wish I hadn't been so rushed, but that's life sometimes. :)