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[taste_of_lead]

Name: David
Age: 17
Location: New Mexico

Comments

[greenstuff]

very dark and pretty good. I'd love ot see some more of your work so I'll give you my yes. Any chance of something light and completely different?

[taste_of_lead]

some from when i was younger, like 14 and 15 but its not as articulate or grown up (obviously.)

[greenstuff]

thats allright.. we all start somewhere right? sometimes the stuff you write when you're younger has the most heart all it needs is a little editing

Yes.

[heykidbiteme]

Not bad. I really like your prose- it's dark, but quite good.

Yes

[purple_lizard]

I like it.