Soohyun/Kiseop - You are so fragile and thin, standing trial for your sins

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Title: You are so fragile and thin, standing trial for your sins
Pairing: Soohyun/Kiseop
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Soohyun paints masterpieces and Kiseop composes symphonies and neither of them find anything beautiful to live for.
A/N: This is long, that's why it's getting it's own post (about 1400+ words) but be forewarned, it's in lapslock. Like

Comments

[anonymous]

why is this so amazing?
why are you so amazing?

[writtendlessly]

aww you're too nice ;~;

[taikachi]

O.O this.... this is really really good!

[writtendlessly]

thank you! :)

[silverstorm666]

Wow... Soohyun/Kiseop are so destructive together, but they make for such angsty dramatic writing full of symbolically opposite goodness. (hehe, did that sentence even make sense?) You have to read the story a couple of times just to understand all the hidden meanings. This was amazing. Your talent for words is amazing.

My 2 favorite lines in the story:

"the massages, the exercise, the medication, the prayers; it's never enough. he finds himself insatiable, grasping desperately at an ideal, an intangible theory, a pathetic desire that he harbors so deep inside himself that it managed to consume him whole before he even noticed."

"kiseop stares directly into glossy black as long as he can until it hurts, lets the music wash over him... if he stares hard enough at the reflection in front of him, he can block out everything else and find himself in a world where those sounds are coming from his own throat."

I was so confused by your summary when I first started reading the story, but by the end I was just like: Wow, it was so... so

[writtendlessly]

aww thank you ;~; i've always thought of sooseop as this wonderfully angsty pairing where both people would simultaneously idolize and despise the other one, because they both have what the other one wants.

i'm glad you enjoyed it though! i was worried it wouldn't be clear, or that the parallels i was trying to make wouldn't make sense, but i'm glad it went over well! :3 <3

[silverstorm666]

I'll be gone for the next 1 1/2 years and won't have access to the internet. I'm sad I won't be able to read and comment on any other stories you write until then. I guess I'll have to go on a reading/commenting spree when I get back! :)

Not that you really needed to know, but I would have felt bad if you wondered why I stopped commenting.

[writtendlessly]

Oh wow! keke thank you for letting me know :)

[keuriwoseo]

;~~~;
This is so beautiful and kind of heartbreaking at the same time...
At first I didn't understand, but the second time I read this, I did and... this is just perfect ;~;
<3

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thank you! :3

[elvenknight16]

You killed me with the last line"

and sometimes, sometimes, worlds would collide and expand, oceans would go dry and crops would burn, and they-they will love.
It is beautiful~
And you are Wonderful!!
I really really truly enjoyed this =D
I can't believe that someone could write angsty Sooseop so prettily as if they were a masterpiece themselves.
You are as brilliant as your mervelous words ^^

[writtendlessly]

aww thank you ;~; you're too kind! :)