One Fell Swoop Drabbles - Part II

Aug 23, 2013 20:55

Part 2 of the themed drabbles. Not really sure what I write even counts as drabbles anymore but it's my life and I do what I want. Posting this on it's own because I like it and because school starts soon so it's probably going to be the only thing I'll post for a while. Enjoy!

{there was not a single spark} )

fandom: u-kiss, pairing: aj/kevin, drabbles

Leave a comment

Comments 14

taerii August 24 2013, 02:50:13 UTC
WOW SHARA DIRTY but no i rly liked it ;A; esp the police line metaphor and the last few lines wahhhhh i really love the way you describe "love"

Reply

writtendlessly August 24 2013, 03:43:34 UTC
THERE WAS LIKE ONE DIRTY PART GET OUT

but omg ty ;____; aj makes me write in metaphors omg idk why ;;;

Reply


suitofarmour August 27 2013, 04:05:04 UTC
ok like so usually people are all metaphor, metaphor~ and i want to punch them in the face
but you do it really well?? like usually people try and fucking fail and it's just awkward for everyone involved BUT
i really like yours

i like [...] Jaeseop can trace the path of black and blue like winding side streets in a small town. In New York City the streets are all straight, perfect ninety degree angles; he would mark the other boy like that, scratch 5th avenue down the curve of his spine with blunt finger nails. even though OUCH ( ... )

Reply

writtendlessly August 27 2013, 23:14:45 UTC
i'm glad you don't want to punch me in the face ;_; honestly idk why writing aj-centered stuff makes me this way, it's really dumb. but yknow. metaphors and shit. they're an easy way to mask my lack of plot

well i didn't mean like carve the lines in him just light scratches god kevin could take it he's probs into that shit anyways

ty~ :3

sry angst is what i do :( i can't write aj interested in ppl without it being sad/angry idek. but yeah lol he wasn't as creepy in this as i was originally intended but i mean, still on the weird side anyways.

but ty ty ty :33333 when school starts i probs won't write at all :( but i hope i can at least finish the thing i've already started idk :ccc

Reply

suitofarmour August 28 2013, 07:00:32 UTC
oh i should reply here too lol

i'd never punch you in the face!! (probably)

nooo the metaphors are pretty, they mask nothing because there is nothing to mask, you are great and ilu, end of story

ps you still owe me a happy fic one day

Reply

writtendlessly August 28 2013, 18:46:41 UTC
ONE DAY

Reply


anonymous August 27 2013, 04:37:55 UTC
that was beautiful

Reply

writtendlessly August 27 2013, 23:14:53 UTC
thank you <3

Reply

suitofarmour August 28 2013, 06:59:05 UTC
BEAUTIFUL, SHARA

BEAUTIFUL

rolls around in all the angst

you srsly make me forget that i don't like kevin or eli OR AJ
or ukiss at all

goddamn you shara

Reply

writtendlessly August 28 2013, 18:46:26 UTC
look at you replying to shit that wasn't directed at you i c i c

keke ikr my own fic makes me forget how much i don't like them either

Reply


anonymous August 29 2013, 04:37:46 UTC
I've always thought that something's wrong with AJ's head when he wrote out Obsession. Now I know why.
(no, just kidding. :p but kudos to the fic. and to AJ's broken army.)

Reply

writtendlessly August 29 2013, 17:23:51 UTC
ty! :)

Reply


silverhoneycat August 31 2013, 17:45:11 UTC
GAH! Left you a comment on aff. The visuals are a guilty pleasure. Rereading, I seem to find a little more each time. Delicious!

Reply

writtendlessly September 7 2013, 01:15:53 UTC
I saw the comment on AFF so thank you for both that comment and this one! :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up