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Joss100 Challenge: Ficlet # 11 - Jealousy

Nov 11, 2005 14:21

Title: Jealousy
Fandom: Firefly
Author: Michmak
Rating: PG
Character(s): Mal, River, Jayne
Pairing: River / Mal
Prompt: 011 - Jealousy (list 2)
Word Count:
Progress: 11/100

The first ten can be found here: Big Damn Prompt Table #2

Summary: “So, can ya really kill me with your brain, or was ya just funnin’ with me when ya said that?” The big ( Read more... )

joss100, firefly, mal/river

Comments 14

shortitude November 11 2005, 19:50:01 UTC

I adore this series, really really really adore it! ::pats series::

Jealous-ridden!Mal is so ::mrowrrr::. Hehehe. And Jayne's cheeky, ain't he? Or maybe he's like that because the Rayne shipper in you sticks out? Either way, I love this series. And River is so...mature, lucid, and more. Lovely.

writwritewrote November 12 2005, 06:04:30 UTC

I love Jayne and I just can't help it. Besides, Mal needs someone to stir him up, right? *birds chirp*

myownlitlcorner November 11 2005, 20:40:47 UTC

Stereotype_vamp's right. The Rayne-shipper in you does stick out. I have to admit, this is a good series.

writwritewrote November 12 2005, 06:05:03 UTC

Thank you. I'll try not to be so obvious about my true affiliations....hehe.

aliaspiral November 11 2005, 20:50:05 UTC

you know, i havent been reading these due to the River/Mal, which isnt my cuppa. however, you KNOW i cant resist Jayne, so i had to read this one.

and im choosing to read it as slightly Rayne. so there! :)

however, i liked seeing that Jayne sees her as a woman, while Mal is trying to convince himself otherwise. and yes, Mal IS the one who made her cry, the big meanie!

but she still makes his coffee, aww.

writwritewrote November 12 2005, 06:05:53 UTC

Thank you - perhaps I can make you a closet Mal/River fan. My first love is Jayne/River of course - but I can't deny the potential between the Captain and his Albatross.

goodisrelative November 11 2005, 21:56:15 UTC

Excellent!
I love how you write River.

writwritewrote November 12 2005, 06:06:41 UTC

River looks like Morticia Adams in your icon. LOL. I love it! And I'm glad you like my River. I'm sorta fond of her myself.

goodisrelative November 14 2005, 13:09:03 UTC

You are not the first to tell me about Morticia, but yes, she does.

I love my icon.

Your River rocks!

out_of_range04 November 12 2005, 05:09:15 UTC

Amazing!

writwritewrote November 12 2005, 06:07:04 UTC

ICON LURVE.