Joss100 Challenge: Ficlet # 21 - Pieces

[writwritewrote]

Sorry for the delay in getting this up. I seem to be saying this a lot lately, but things have been really busy, what with Firefly:TVS now up and running *plug*. Episode Two - Heart and Sole - goes up next Wednesday and is in final edit stages right now. It’s funny, funny, funny and also - sad. *LOL

Comments

[houses7177]

Beautiful. I think my favorite bits were the images of Wash and Zoe--how he fixed her and made her stronger, how she's still standing. *sniffle* Lovely.

[ninamazing]

Oh my GOD. I am SUCH a sucker for fics where one person whispers another person's name while they're sleeping. I mean it. It KILLS ME DEEEEEEAD. *loves you*

He has lost so much over the years he tries to hold onto everything; never letting anything go - not even the memories that rip at him and make him bleed.

SO good. I never thought about it that way before, but it's SO interesting. One of the things I really love about your fics is that you say all these great meta things about the characters in the context of your stories, and you're so insightful. Excellent.

Also, "She wants to slide into him"? Amazing in that it was a sex metaphor that was hot and yet completely not dirty because duh, she's the mortar fixing the brokenness of his past and it's very sweet. And also completely about sex. :P

So, you are fantastic, part 90394390223. Let's have the next one soon, shall we? ;)

[damiarvn]

you made me cry again. just thought you might like to know.