Away in the Woods (3/3)

[wrldpossibility]

Title: Away in the Woods
Author: wrldpossibility
Fandom: Castle
Chapter: 3
Characters: Castle/Beckett
Word Count: 3350
Rating: R to NC-17 (finally, we're getting somewhere!)
Spoilers: For S4
Summary:Beckett and Castle are banished to her father's cabin in the woods. Alone. For days. Make of that what you will.
Author's Note: I had this finished two days ago, but

Comments

[yen35]

Lovely. Now, have to sit back and wait patiently for it to happen on the show. I hope I don't burst a blood vessel waiting and oh, I hope that in the show when Kate tells Castle that she heard him, he takes it coolly like he did here.

[wrldpossibility]

Me too. I'd hate for that to turn into an argument, though I'd understand his anger. Thanks for reading!

[fading_ripples]

Hee..love this! Seriously, all of it is awesome.
♥

[wrldpossibility]

Thank you!!

[whitewriter]

gak!!! Best. Ending. Ever. Loved every beat and the pacing of it all was super fun. Castle fixing the roof was a crack up. Sighs. So sad its come to an end, cuz I can't really ask for more then, can I?

[wrldpossibility]

Thanks! I do have more...just a bit more, because I couldn't resist writing how the others would react. I think they'll be one-shots. We'll see. :)

[recycledstars]

I've had this open all day trying to thing of what to say because (apparently I'm speechless) - I loved it. I really did. Even some things that I don't usually like? They just worked here. I didn't even notice them until I re-read it.

And it's superbly crafted, it all just kind of falls into place one thing after the other and the progression feels so natural. And I'm always a fan of a sex scene that's hot and funny in equal turns, much more real that way.

Plus the confrontation in this was equal parts perfection and heart-wrenching.

(Okay, so apparently I have overcome my inability to find words...)

[wrldpossibility]

Oh, thank you. Now I'm really curious to know what you usually don't like that worked in this one, because I'm very picky about things I dislike in fic too. Sometimes, things I dislike in general make it into my plots, and I do a lot of squinting and looking at it sideways to decide if I can get away with it or not...

[recycledstars]

The thing about likes and dislikes is that they're all about context of course. The main thing that comes to mind here is a particularly odd tick of mine, and that's Beckett calling Castle 'Rick' which usually makes me want to punch a wall (even, actually, in canon, go figure). But like I said, didn't even notice it until I re-read it and even then I was like "well it had to be like that, it would've been wrong without it.")

And I know that feeling... an odd phenomena? But no squinting required, you got away with everything. ;)

[wrldpossibility]

Ah yes. I agree. I think it sounds awkward when she calls him that, which is why I thought it fit...it just kind of slipped out in an emotionally intimate moment. And since she was already feeling off-balance and insecure...yeah. *g*

[huntaj18]

Loved this,especially this scene "When she rises, she's standing close enough for him to notice the surgically precise edge of her scar running from one side of her clavicle to disappear under the fabric of her sports bra."

I've heard different things that the audience will see her scar (hopefully its true) but I would really like for Castle to see it. I think it would make for an incredible scene.

Thanks for sharing this!

[wrldpossibility]

Oh, I'd love to see it, too...meaning, I'd love a scene where Castle sees it.

Thanks for reading!