Challenge #13, QuickFic #4

[theun4givables]

Title: Meet the Parents
Prompt: Faithful & True, Skeletons in the Closet
Bonus? Nope
Word Count: 3533
Rating: PG-13
Original/Fandom: Tomorrow Trilogy 'verse
Pairings (if any): Savin/Mitchel
Warnings (Non-Con/Dub-Con etc): Language, a tiny bit of sexual content, bigotry
Summary: Something borderline fluffy for Savin and Mitchel. Mitchel's meeting

Comments

[alien_writings]

This is definitely the funniest holiday gift I've gotten this year ^_^ -- I laughed muchly while reading this. The interactions between everyone were amusing, and it was quite fun to see Hajime vs. Mitchel. One particularly lulzy moment was the one where Mitchel just flat-out called Savin's dad an asshole. The best line was probably when Mitchel mused to himself about how dating the husband of the man he killed might not be the smartest decision ever, though. That bit amused me enough I kind of want to make an icon out of it.

Hajime's feelings about bisexuality made me...less that sympathetic towards him, shall we say. I was like "dude, bisexuality is a thing. Deal with it."

Also, what is the deal between Savin and Mari?

[theun4givables]

You're welcome. :D

It amused me the whole way through writing it. I was just like oh, boys. xD Boys boys boys boys boys.

Yeah, Hajime's just...a douche. I guess he was always supposed to be a douche. *sigh*

I think Mari found out Savin was dating Mitchel and was none too pleased by this fact, so they're currently not talking. She'll come around eventually, I think.

[alien_writings]

Ah, I had a feeling Mari might have found out about Savin's relationship. Random: seeing Mitchel's line about how he might have gotten along with Hajime under different circumstances then made me want to see fic where they were actually friends. That would also be quite amusing to me, though it would also be kinda terrifying. It'd be funny if they were chilling (or as close to "chilling" as either of those two would get) while Savin was there for some reason.

I'd think about writing that myself since you already wrote one fic that I encouraged, only I don't know that I could do Mitchel-voice at all! Savin-voice I can do okay, though (or at least I think I was okay at it last time I tried).

Speaking of fic, I feel like I owe you something for this hilarious gift fic, though I don't know that there's anything you want to see me do? If you do have anything, feel free to tell me, and I'll see what I can do about a late Christmas present, lol.

[theun4givables]

Man, I kinda want to write fic of that, too, but I don't understand under what circumstances that the two could meet and "chill." lol.

Mitchel-voice is suprisingly easy. There's a different rhythm to him, definitely, as well as a refusal, most of the time, to start sentences with conjunctions. He also has a bigger vocabulary than I usually access so Sarah sometimes helps me edit in "big words" as she puts it in order to get him to sound more edumucated, lol.

I'll think about it, but right now I'm coming up pretty blank. We'll see what happens. :)