Fanfic: What Can Hold Him

[wwonder]

Title: What Can Hold Him
Fandom: Twilight
Character/Pairing: Garrett/Kate
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 946
Summary: It's years and years of lonesome travel and adventuring. Always acquaintances and never friendships, and live meals that don't have time to protest.
Disclaimer: The characters do not belong to me.
Spoilers: Breaking Dawn

Comments

[jadeddiva]

I love this. I love the background you give Garrett, I love Kate, and I love their attraction.

[wwonder]

thank you :)

omg your icon. i love it. it makes me laugh, but also feel really sad at the same time.

[windblownglass]

Oh, wow. I love, love, love this. I've been rereading it since I first clicked on the link and.. man, I am in awe. The way you wrote this is just amazing, and the history you gave him just completely works. You captured Garrett's personality so well, too, and the way you write about Kate and him is just fantastic. Heck, more than fantastic. I just wish that I had the words to praise this as much as I love it!

My favorite lines?
When she shocks him, sending him ass backwards off his feet, that's when he first knows he's in love with her.

&

Vampires mate for life, right?

Garrett thinks Kate must be the exception. She is a succubus, after all.

So he doesn't think it means the same thing to her as it does to him when she slams him against a tree and has her way with him.

Wow. Just wow.

[wwonder]

Aww, you're making me blush.

Thanks so much, I really appreciate you taking the time to write such a long review and tell me what you think.

[acting_freako]

That was beautiful. I loved it, I loved how you pictured his ideals.