When You Believe

Feb 28, 2010 23:18


Title: When You Believe [Sequel to When He Loved Me]
Pairing: OnKey, Onew/Key
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: My story. The end.
A/N: This is the sequel to When He Loved Me. It is based off the song "When You Believe" by Mariah Carey. Once again, I altered some of the genders/POVs to match the storyline. I hope everyone enjoys! Oh, warning: unbeta-ed.

The most unexpected of miracles... )

rating: pg, pairing: key/onew, !fanfic

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wykedpanda March 1 2010, 05:02:34 UTC
I swear, it's amazing people like you who make me want to write forever. <3

Yes, the ending was sad, and I so hoped to not end it that way, but...I typed that last sentence and just KNEW that I couldn't add on more. It would ruin...the magic (<

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geenkey March 1 2010, 08:05:23 UTC
oh my god, my eyes teary.... oohh so sweet but sad... i can't call this sad ending but i can't call this happy ending to... whoaaa.....

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wykedpanda March 2 2010, 21:02:31 UTC
*hands tissue*

I hope you still enjoyed it, regardless of the ending T__T

Thank you for reading!

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jelliemonster March 2 2010, 00:28:57 UTC
omo- omo-!!!!

ugh- it's tugging at my heart X__X
I was so close to crying already~~ wah!

Whatever element made Onew into Jinki really knew what would have happened. Idk, but I really loved this! gahhh-- I've been reading fics lately about angels and destiny... but this about miracles is really different :D

I'm speechless... I wanna say more, but yeah- speechless! haha XD

But I really love this! :DDD

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wykedpanda March 2 2010, 21:03:31 UTC
Yay for a different genre! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it...and I'm glad I made you speechless. I was hoping that readers, after finished reading, would need like a second to just absorb it all. Sort of an impactful ending, you know?

Thank you for reading!

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wykedpanda March 8 2010, 04:35:29 UTC
Hehe, it's no problem! I'm just glad you took the time to comment! :)

Oh, I'm sorry for almost making you cry! *gives hug* But, I'm pleased you enjoyed this fic!

Thank you for reading!

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alabelle_etoile March 6 2010, 14:57:37 UTC
i can't believe i just read this.

This story poked my heart.I love love love Jinki's character,the situation was harder for him, i think. He appeared to help Kibum, but at the same time, the longer he was with Kibum the harder it was to part.Bittersweet.
i enjoyed it.Thanks.*u*

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wykedpanda March 8 2010, 04:36:01 UTC
Yes, this was a bittersweet fic. I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you for reading!

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