Week 24 - bats in the belfry

[wyliekat]

Once upon a time, three women lived in a tower. More specifically, they lived in the conjuratory of a bell tower, the portion that was usually reserved for only the most devoted forms of religious toadying

Comments

[basric]

I like it. Its evil versus evil and evil wins. Excellent writing.

[team_jessie]

Excellent!
What fantastic imagery you used here. I was hooked all the way through!

[vaguelyclear]

Twist endings are the best, I have to say, and yours was unexpected, but so well done! Great entry :D

[mstrobel]

Haha!! I love it!

[i_17bingo]

The way you described the sisters, they felt godlike and eternal, and so the twist was even more scary. He'll probably go after Baba Yaga next.