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min7girl May 8 2012, 11:02:37 UTC
Gah!!!! Two posts so close together! You're spoiling me! I like being spoiled though so keep it up! :)

And And oh yeah a first time complete with a wonderful back rub to start it off. Sigh! I do love ontae. Sigh! Amazing work!

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wynnetimate May 10 2012, 05:11:23 UTC
I'll try not to fall off the face of the earth for months at a time again...

Thanks for reading! <3

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addicterated May 8 2012, 12:40:41 UTC
I love how Taemin's really *almost* the seducer but not quite... yum :)

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wynnetimate May 10 2012, 05:11:41 UTC
He's such an innocent little boy... *snorts*

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linnhe May 8 2012, 14:23:18 UTC
Taemin's ass is perfect.
right? :( ugh it's just so nice

and can i casually love how taemin doesn't think things through, too caught up in lust? and that he's actually masturbated before - all of this made him feel real and relatable, much more so than the typical taemin that dazedly tumbles from one new experience into another, all wide-eyed. i also liked that onew tries to tell himself he has to be the responsible one, but really just ends up failing :D

Taemin is grinning at him, backlit with a halo, the edges of his skin and hair on fire with fading sunlight.
beautiful burning waif ♥

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wynnetimate May 10 2012, 05:12:53 UTC
Stories where virgins are blushing idiots really make me mad. I mean, no one is that sheltered anymore. And Taemin doesn't really seem like the sheltered type, despite his hyungs efforts.

I love you and your comments and just. Garhbarh. Be mine. <3

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mintyfresh1 May 8 2012, 19:00:12 UTC
omg i am DYING here
i just love how taemin's like...innocent...but he's not omg idk how to explain it
ontae are so perfect idek these fics are just so amazing ghjlsagjdkasjgisov

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wynnetimate May 10 2012, 05:13:33 UTC
Gatoharhgartthanks for reading! :D

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wynnetimate May 10 2012, 05:14:01 UTC
Wah, thank you so much for reading. <3

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