The Crane Wife: Chapter 2 of 7

[x_losfic]

Title: The Crane Wife
Chapter: Two:Seven
Author: x_los
Rating: R
Pairing: Five/Ainley!Master
Summary: In which the Doctor's first day requires him to contend with a giant octopus, obscure points of Gallifreyan grammar, and his new Master's confusion of epistolary bickering with bonding.
Beta: aralias, sharper than a subtle knife, sweeter than sucrose

Comments

[x_los]

Totally yes. And indeed, not too long now before that crops up. Already written, actually. And excellent, thanks! It's good to hear that, b/c the tone of this chapter was a bit less comedic than the last, and I was worried that might be too jarring.

Indeed--well, but we can't expect him to just /get/ that immediately. :p And I kind of want 'Do I sense tragedy?!' as an icon with Very Distressed Looking!Five now...

[asthenie_vd]

[x_losfic]

Thank you so much, that's so good to hear.

And you know you want the angst--you'd be like a Peri/Erimem shipper or something if angst really wasn't your cup of tea.

THEY ARE SO CUTE I MUST USE THEM OMGGGGG!!!

[asthenie_vd]

[time_testudinem]

Re: questionable definition of fluffy

This needs an icon showing Doctor, Master, and a very cute porcupine. The caption says "with these two, fluff is a relative value"

[x_losfic]

True, I LOVE the Kingmaker. Not least for 'omg, the master!!' 'no, no Peri, just some other guy with a beard...'

Seriously, that audio--fantastic!

[time_testudinem]

Five icons are awesome!