Comments | x2xbandgeekx2x: I had a thought and a realization the night I saw Transformers, while brushing my teeth.

x2xbandgeekx2x

I had a thought and a realization the night I saw Transformers, while brushing my teeth.

Jul 14, 2007 22:01

Title: New Beginnings
Pairing: There are only vague insinuations at any pairing at all. And I don't want to make this look weirder than it is. lmao
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I'm making it all up.
Summary: It's sort of an expansion on the last scene of the movie, in a way...
A/N: I make a vague reference to the prequel, which I assume pretty much no ( Read more... )

my fanfic

Comments 14

johnnyssk8rgrl July 15 2007, 04:14:58 UTC

wow. that was deep.

what's an optimus?

x2xbandgeekx2x July 15 2007, 14:33:22 UTC

Optimus Prime... he's the leader of the Autobots (this is written from another Autobot's POV).

x2xbandgeekx2x July 15 2007, 14:35:29 UTC

Actually, Optimus is the trailer truck on the left in my icon. And this is written from the POV of the car in front. But Optimus isn't in his vehichle form in the story.

*grins* I ♥ Transformers.

johnnyssk8rgrl July 16 2007, 03:06:27 UTC

how do you make that heart?

Thread 6

fatedfuriy July 15 2007, 10:52:36 UTC

Really interesting. I love the chain of thought process. I didn't think it was too weird or anything. It's Bumblebee's POV, right?

x2xbandgeekx2x July 15 2007, 14:31:38 UTC

Thanks! And yeah, it's Bumblebee's POV.

artemischan July 19 2007, 18:54:08 UTC

Oooh, I like this! Took me a minute to figure it was Bee's POV, but...I really like it. Well done!

luckystar37 July 20 2007, 03:45:12 UTC

Grrr, left FB and it got deleted by LJ!

Anyway, I loved this... it was very poignant and such a good take on the end. I love the voice you gave to his perception, and I LOVE the inclusion and spin on Optimus's musings. And I love Optimus, but that's so besides the point. Bee's pain is intangible and acute at the same time.

x2xbandgeekx2x July 20 2007, 13:29:41 UTC

Lj really is evil sometimes. =/

Thank you! ♥

speechie42 July 20 2007, 07:32:53 UTC

This has a really interesting perspective. I'm left wondering what exactly Optimus and Bee are about to embark on (oh man, I didn't mean for that to come out sounding so dirty >_<). Nice job.

x2xbandgeekx2x July 20 2007, 13:28:27 UTC

Thanks!

oh man, I didn't mean for that to come out sounding so dirty

*grins* Oh, I was having all sorts of thoughts when I wrote this... but I'm afraid I'm not capable of writing such things. So I'll just leave it up to your imagination. =)