Forbidden Love : Chapter 3 : Part 2 : Silly Destiny & Stupid Fate

Oct 02, 2010 18:38

Hiyas, its Rebecca agains, this is my part two of my Forbidden Love chapter 3.

Hope you all like it x)

AND sorry once more because of my late update

anyways, take your time reading and comments will be appreciated <3


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characters : yoona, my fanfic : forbidden love, characters : donghae, pairings : yoonhae

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anonymous October 2 2010, 09:41:52 UTC
Awww...it ended with a cliff hanger. I love it so much. I hope you can update soon...

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x3_strucked October 2 2010, 09:43:24 UTC
ngawss... im sooo sorry, but kekekes, i love making cliffhangers. but dw, ill update asap :P

rebecca x

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moonpuri October 2 2010, 10:48:24 UTC
P.S. I’m texting with my left hand AND IT’S GAY! ):<
gaahahaha.. funny funny yuri. poor yoona, her protector cant be with her today.
i'd love to see seohyun whining, n jess 'no nonsense' attitude came out, so cute.
move people! the birt of HIM Yoona is coming.
but, aww, donghae distract her n now she got hurt, hope nothing serious.

i want moooore...
update soon please.

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x3_strucked October 2 2010, 10:51:53 UTC
ahahahas, yeahs poor yoona ><" she got bullied by Ms Han Kyung and yuri wasnt there to protect her.. oh wells kekes. im trying to add a bit of humour into the story lols, i hope its working cus there wont be much humour in the climax of the story.

and dw, im going to start writing asap.

kekes cyars, moonpuri <3

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x3_strucked October 2 2010, 10:52:49 UTC
oh yeahs, if you would like to check your previous comment, i have answered all your questions :P

take care <3

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janet_yoonhae October 2 2010, 12:01:26 UTC
What a cliff hanger! I love this very much! Hae was so scared when he heard Eunhyuk said that Yoona at the back! I wonder what will happen when chapter 4! Please update as fast as you can, Rebecca! I can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

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x3_strucked October 2 2010, 12:09:16 UTC
ngaws, sorry about the cliffhanger lols but im glad you liked it :P yesh, poor hae, he only went in to tease leetuek and eunhyuk and then he gets a massive shock, i hope him and yoona are going to be alrights <3

see you in the next update.

lah, Rebecca x

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chfreak October 3 2010, 02:25:33 UTC
ahhh.... it ended with a Cliff hanger. i was like why do it have end here??? hahaha ;D hope you will update soon. :)

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x3_strucked October 3 2010, 02:40:06 UTC
ahahas, thankyou so much, ill be updating soon so see you soon <3

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mayshy October 3 2010, 05:44:25 UTC
omfg u really love cliffhangers don't u? haha
and omo! i hope yoona is okay, u can tell teuk and hae are really worried, especially hae.

i have to tell u though, shouldn't u write about the present too? i mean what's happening with taec and yoona? it would be cool if u wrote about it since i almost forgot that this was the same sorry, but this is ok too XD

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x3_strucked October 3 2010, 06:14:53 UTC
ahahas,its alrights,
i really wanted to write from the past to the present because theres more yoonhae moments and other stuff and i thought everybody would like that kekekes,
but anyways ill try and update as much as possible so i can get to the present quickly, cus i too want to write about yoontaec as wells lol <3

nice talking to you agains,

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mayshy October 3 2010, 06:32:25 UTC
lol that's okay rebecca, i just though that this fic was going to be written in the past and the present simultaneously, but i get what ur trying to go for ^^

same here :)

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x3_strucked October 3 2010, 06:36:50 UTC
lols, writing it in the past and the present simultaneously? omo, thats a good idea, but lols that would be double the work and my updates would take even more longer.

i think i might just bring Taecyeon early into the story, i was planning to introduce him later on but i guess it wont kill me if changed it a bit :D

see you in the next update <3

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