Forbidden Love : Chapter 1 Part 1 : Crush At First Sight

[x3_strucked]

Forbidden Love: Chapter 1 Part 1- Crush at first sight

12:09am, 15th May 2012
SNSD Dormitory, Yoona and Yuri’s room

Midnight. The time to mentally, emotionally and physically recover. The time to dream to your heart’s content and to walk away from reality. The time to sink into your imagination and live in a fairytale, YOUR fairytale. And most

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[unnielove]

oh my god this is so good. geez. :OOOOOO

i really really really want to know what happens next.

TAECYEON. EVIL. EVIL EVIL EVIL DDD:< DONT YOU DARE DO THIS JUST TO RUIN YOONA'S LIFE. IF YOU CARED ABOUT HER YOUD LET HER BE HAPPY/HELP HER. GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR D:< (lol sorry im on a rant here)

this is awesome oh my gosh. thanks for sharing it over at yoonhaeexplosion ^^ continue to write, your writing is lovely <3

[x3_strucked]

Unnielove, thank you sooo much, its sooooo nice to finally meet you.

i was soooo scared that i wouldn't get any comments :(
thankyou sooo much, your comment means a lot to me x)

yeshhh, ==''
I AM SOOOO SORRY for making Taecyeon evil, but i guess its just a fanfic rights?
I AM ALSO SOOO TERIBBLY SORRY for making Yoona go through all this.

anyways, thankyou soo much agains, you're so nice
your fanfics are SO AWESOME as well, i was reading them a few days ago for some inspiration x)
kekeke

take care <3

[unnielove]

haha no problem~ call me cee-cee ^-^

ahhh dont be. everyone at yoonhaeexplosion like swarms to whatever fics that get published- we're quite starved for yoonhae at the moment x_x LOL and your welcome ^^

yeah i know haha xD

no problem and really? thanks xD feel free to comment on them as you'd like. nice to meet you too <3

[x3_strucked]

OMGOSH x)

i know rights? its been like forever and a day since an actual yoonhae moment has been posted.

but apparently theres going to be an SM concert? Its going on for 3 months, omg swooooon i wonder how much moments that would be (drools)

i am not kidding cee-cee, your fanfics are really good (Y)
i especially liked the Dark Knight fanfic :P
it was really intense and had a really good dark plot.

anyways, take care.

Rebecca x

[mayshy]

damn!

...

this is really good, and i mean REALLY good! it had me on edge and shit was suspenseful xD
i can't believe taec, he's so mean! poor yoona...
omg i want more keke.

[x3_strucked]

thankyou so much, mayshy.
you are too kind x) kekeke.

yesh and i can't believe I made taecyeon evil in this story.
x( bad me.

anyways, thankyou sooo much agains mayshy.
its so good to finally be able to talk to you.

btw, i wanted to ask.
since this is my first time using livejournal.
why is that whenver i log out, i can't see my comments.
but when i log back in, i can see my comments?
this is confusing.. x(

[mayshy]

ur welcome ^^
and welcome aboard to the awesome that is yoonhae xD

hmm... it might be because u lock ur comments? or disable them? idk tbh... sorry :(

[x3_strucked]

thankyou thankyou thankyou.
i hope i make a valuable addition to the yoonhae community.
:L kekeke

did i also mention that I am a HUGE fan of your fanfic, Regrets? the story is sooo good, you did a great job x)

OMO, its alrights you dont have to say sorry ==''
its just that its my first time using livejournal and its a bit different from everything else i have used.Like i had made a mistake in my entry and i tried to edit it, but when i logged out the entry didn't change.

but i guess it really doesnt matter, as long as i can post my fanfics ^^.

p.s. sorry for bothering you :(

[karen_ren]

OH GOSH~ This is like... super-intense! D:
it's sooo good, I love the detailed description, the wordings, all of it! XD

TAEC IS SO EVIL! How could he make Yoona suffer like that! ugggghh! /bitchslap Taec (Taec in this fic, of course, LOL)

I really want to read more! <3333 Thanks for sharing this at YoonHaExplosion, the ppl are are quite YoonHae-deprived right now. kkkk~

[x3_strucked]

NGAWS, stop it your embarrassing me x)

thankyou so so much for taking your time to read it :P

Yeahs, i had to make an antagonist in the story. I mean no story or fanfic is a one way trip to a happily ever after rights? I can't say Taec is evil though, he just loves Yoona too much, so that might explain why he would blackmail her..

ANYHOW, thankyou so much agains.
I will be uploading chapter one part two in a little while.
kekekes.

[karen_ren]

kkkk~ you deserved to be praised! Your writing is so good. XDD I'll gladly use my time to read a good YoonHae fanfic. lol

OHH TRUE THAT! Every story needs a villain. :) I see, he loves Yoona too much, but effort to get her is a little bit... unusual. 8D

OH Thank YOU for the great fanfic shared here! ^^ and I'm waiting for your update~! :))

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LOLS, yes it certainly is unusual kekekes :)

i spent most of my days before writing this fanfic thinking and thinking of what sort of method Taecyeon would go through to get Yoona. And i mean a truly wicked but simple method, something that would isolate her and make her helpless.

rofl, i think im getting too carried away x)

anyways, its nice to meet you.

my next update would probably be coming around next week so stay tuned xD

Rebecca x

[janet_yoonhae]

taecyeon is so evil..........but is a good chapter! hope u can post part 2!

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thankyou sooo much Janet_yoonhae x)

yesh i guess Taecyeon is sort of evil in a way, but if you were in his shoes, you might be able to understand why he is doing this to Yoona.

of course i can't say too much or it might spoil what happens in the future for this story kekekes :P

thankyous once again, your comments, all your comments mean soo much to me x)

i will be posting Chapter 1 Part 2 next week, so stay tuned.

Rebecca x

[janet_yoonhae]

i will! but i really can't wait for next week! XD

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kekekes~

thankyou so much, your comment means a lot to me.

im thinking about posting the next update on wednesday.

but kekekes, i really wanted to finish chapter 2 before posting, but then that might seem too long because i've only just started on chapter 2. So i've decided to post the next update before friday this week, kekekes, hope to see you then.

you shouldnt really expect much from part 2 because it is going to take place 10 years before part 1. i wanted to explore how yoonhae came to be, kekeke and also how Taecyeon comes into the story.

so anyways, please bear with me

Rebecca x

[x3_strucked]

THANKYOU SO MUCH!!

wows, lmfao, you still want more after reading 10 long pages of words? wows, you are incredible x)

kyaaaaas, sorry to disappoint you can see that Part 1 starts at 2012, well I've decided that i wanted to start my fanfic fresh, 10 years ago to be exact. I want to explore how Donghae came to love yoona, and how yoona came to love Donghae and also how Taecyeon comes into the story.

I want to explore those bits, until reaching the climax which is what you just read which is Chapter 1 Part 1.

anyways, please bear with me.

nice talking to you kekekes :P

Rebecca x

[x3_strucked]

ngaws, thankyou so much.

you are sooo nice kekekes.

and nice to meet you, Miley

Rebecca xoxo