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Your Hands Are In My Hair, But My Heart Is In Your Teeth: Epilogue (1/2)

Oct 11, 2011 00:00

Title: Your Hands Are In My Hair, But My Heart Is In Your Teeth
Author: x_avecia_x
Rating: I want to say R, but in all reality probaby it's NC-17
Warning: profanity, smut, mentions of drug addiction, some things that could be construed as violent.
Word Count: 1,896
Disclaimer: I do not own Community - although I would totally marry Dan Harmon then claim half ( Read more... )

community, fanfiction, jeff/annie

Comments 16

classicfreak October 10 2011, 23:50:48 UTC

MY EMOTIONS

x_avecia_x October 11 2011, 06:18:13 UTC

I adore this comment :)

Thanks for reading x

sillyrabbitlp October 11 2011, 00:43:06 UTC

I've been waiting for this for what seems like forever. As usual I found the dialogue between the J/A too be spot on and as for career choice I didn't think it would be out of the realm of possibility for her becoming a teacher. In all honesty when you mentioned in the previous chapter that she was looking for a job I thought she would end up teaching at Greendale kinda bring the whole thing full circle. I'm sure I will have additional comments and possible final epilogue suggestions after I have had time to digest this chapter.

x_avecia_x October 11 2011, 06:22:15 UTC

Thank you. In all honesty I just couldn't see Annie do anything else but be a teacher after everything she's been through.

I'm considering the final part to be a 'five years later' installment so you never know about that thing on the subject line of your comment :)

sillyrabbitlp October 23 2011, 16:28:07 UTC

After reading this entire fic over for what must have been the 20th time. I have been trying to think of a way it should end. Even though you have probably finished it I just wanted to share the one I can't seem to get out of my head. If you are doing a five+ year fic I would like away to find out what happened to the rest of the group like the only way I thought of that made sense would be Jeff and Annie going through old photo albums, after making so many dioramas I can't see Annie going completely digital. You could of course use this to show what happened to them over the years like their kids first day at school or when she finally punched Allen in the face.

x_avecia_x November 9 2011, 22:06:41 UTC

Nope, not written a word on the final part at all because I'm stumped! I have some kind of idea which isn't really in the same style as I've written the rest of the story but I'll give it a go.

I like your idea about looking back over photographs though - can you imagine Grandpa!Jeff looking at pictures and saying to Annie 'god remember when you snorted coke and slept with men for money, ah those were the days!' That might bring the LOLZ. I don't know though, we'll see how it goes!

ndnickerson October 11 2011, 01:08:42 UTC

oooh, love it! very nice. as for the second part, i've always liked christening-the-house sex, but i'd be happy with anything. :)

x_avecia_x October 11 2011, 06:24:23 UTC

Thanks, I'll consider it - I may do that as an 'out-take' as it were. We'll see! Thanks again for reading :)

thebadunkadunk October 11 2011, 13:03:30 UTC

Yes! I've been waiting for a while and you haven't disappointed. I like how realistic you made it, sweet and yet not too sweet. I loved how Annie's past hasn't been glossed over even though they're having a happy ending. Loved the "proposal" too!

x_avecia_x October 11 2011, 16:34:56 UTC

Cheers, yeah Annie's never really gonna get over her past here I don't think, although it wouldn't affect her every day, just when something major comes along I reckon.

And as for the proposal, I have to admit, I partly used some of my own experience for that. My fiancé gave me the whole spiel about love etc and how wonderful I was but never actually got to the point of asking the damn question so I had to prompt him. Men eh? So yeah, it was a sweet proposal I guess :)

How'd the exams go?

thebadunkadunk October 12 2011, 01:44:25 UTC

Aw, that's such a sweet proposal! You guys sound like a cute couple, I remember you saying he was in Texas on a business trip during the premiere and you guys were going to try and watch it online together or something like that.

The LSAT went okay! I'm so nervous to get my score back, I'm starting my applications now in the meantime so I can at least get started on that. I'm always inspired to write fic but never to write personal statements lol

x_avecia_x October 12 2011, 19:26:48 UTC

It kind of was a sweet proposal - and in Paris too. A girl can't complain I guess. He was in Texas but missed the premier as he was too busy out drinking! Typical, then he got his passport stolen so was delayed in getting back home. It was a proper nightmare. But still, we're that couple that are never affectionate in public, we're more like frenemies to be honest!

Glad your LSAT went well, exams I can do but I HATE doing applications for anything, there's always one question that stumps me.

xmaspterodactyl June 7 2013, 06:14:56 UTC

A year and a half late, but "achievement unlocked," I just lol'd. Nice.

x_avecia_x June 7 2013, 11:54:29 UTC

haha! Thank you for taking time to read this!

x

xmaspterodactyl June 8 2013, 03:20:50 UTC

Actually doing a re-read. Still waiting for "Your Mother..." Part 3. Granted, I'm not one to talk in regards to regular posting schedules. Hope you're doin' well, as haven't seen much outta ya.

x_avecia_x June 10 2013, 17:01:47 UTC

Oh my posting schedule is completely out of the window but writing "Your mother..." requires me to be in a particular frame of mind which is not the easiest to either get into, or indeed, out of.

That being said, it's been a pretty horrendous week so far that I might take a stab at trying to get something knocked out.

You never know...