Your Hands Are In My Hair, But My Heart Is In Your Teeth: Epilogue (2/2)

Nov 29, 2011 23:59

Title: Your Hands Are In My Hair, But My Heart Is In Your Teeth
Author: x_avecia_x
Rating: I want to say R, but in all reality probaby it's NC-17
Warning: profanity, smut, mentions of drug addiction, some things that could be construed as violent.
Word Count: 2,241
Disclaimer: I do not own Community - although I would totally marry Dan Harmon then claim half ( Read more... )

community, fanfiction, jeff/annie

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fangirl_101 November 30 2011, 01:31:45 UTC
Perfect ending :)

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x_avecia_x December 5 2011, 19:54:48 UTC
Thank you!x

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ndnickerson November 30 2011, 02:05:49 UTC
awwww, they were so sweet. lovely ending. and i think britta probably would be happy for them. ;) great work.

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x_avecia_x December 5 2011, 19:57:34 UTC
Thank you, I reckon she'd be happy for them too. Have to admit, the very end of this chapter with Jeff putting the flower on her grave is my favourite part - the chapter starts with Annie needing closure about the whole thing and ended with Jeff getting his little bit of closure too.

Thanks again for your support :)

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classicfreak November 30 2011, 03:32:33 UTC
Now, don't get too weirded out by this because I just watched the Community Cast reaction to winning TV guide cover an so this might just be a mush of happy/tears/overjoyed lunacy. Please bear with. (this may be in essay form, but that's only because I love you [in the way a complete stranger can love another complete stranger over the internet because they cause the other's heart to swell in happiness over her amazing talent in fanfiction ( ... )

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x_avecia_x December 5 2011, 20:09:18 UTC
Holy crap what a review! Awesome ( ... )

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classicfreak December 5 2011, 20:30:40 UTC
I'm sorry that the mental filter I used to have has broken and I've lost the key to the place it's in so it may not ever be fixed and you'll be plagued with long comments with lots of caps, because I just have a lot of feelings ( ... )

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x_avecia_x December 5 2011, 21:30:13 UTC
I love the fact your mental filter is on the blink! And if you're the CAPS LOCK Queen then I am the ! mark Queen. You'll figure that out soon enough :)

I'm glad though that during the moving scene that Jeff and Annie (in the way I've portrayed them in previous chapters anyway) still rang true. And hot damn you do have the most incredible and filthy imagination - that was wonderful the image of Annie cooking for their kids in her apron a la 1950s housewife having erotic recollections of her and Jeff on the counter top! Love it!

I'm glad you were mad at Annie because it was meant to be like that - the frustration you felt was kind of what Jeff was feeling. So, mission accomplished!!!

x

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xmaspterodactyl November 30 2011, 05:42:06 UTC
Closure, thou hast given unto us. Wonderful ending.

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x_avecia_x December 5 2011, 19:54:30 UTC
*blushes*

Why thank you, I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to let me know your thoughts on this story.

x

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