It Was The Smartest Thing I Ever Did, Because Now You're Here (7/?)

[x_avecia_x]

Title: It Was The Smartest Thing I Ever Did, Because Now You're Here
Author: x_avecia_x
Rating: PG-13
Warning: A few sweary words, nothing too shocking.
Word Count: 2,906
Disclaimer: I do not own Community - although I would totally marry Dan Harmon then claim half in our (inevitable) divorce settlement - that is unless he conceeds to my end game Jeff/Annie

Comments

[crittab]

Yay! Annie's still a little crankier than I think she should be, but that's probably just because I'm defensive about Jeff the way most people are about Britta.

Another great chapter. Can't wait for more :)

[x_avecia_x]

I did think that Annie was a bit weird in this, but she's really all over the place still because she's such a planner and everything is not going the way it's supposed to for her. Add in the hormones and you get a seriously cranky Annie. But, I will make her nicer in the next chapter, I promise :)

Thanks again for reading, I really appreciate the comment :)

x

[classicfreak]

THIS IS JUST SOO BEAUTIFUL!

Oh Mr. Dildopolis I used to think happy thoughts about you, not anymore. You're a dumbass for kick her out. I'm sure Jeff could lawyer your ass into paying fines and having the rest of Greendale hate you because you put a clearly pregnant woman out on the streets. SMH.

Well, well, well, look who's acting mature now Jefe. You are a beautiful human being for not being a douche, and giving up your bed for her. tbh I was kind of hoping a compromise with sharing the bed would happen, but this chapter is just as amazing without it!

I loved the domestic!bliss that was going on in the bathroom. It was just really cute and fluffy and awesome. YES!

The babykicking part was just icing on the cake. Jeff totally fell for the child, and he revealed something to Annie that will definitly help her fall back into love with him. Also, he finally smartened up and asked her to stay with him (hopefully he got her to make dinner out of it)

Another lovely chapter to an amazing story. Keep up the good work!

[x_avecia_x]

Thank you! Yeah Jeff could lawyer Annie back into her apartment if he wanted to - but he totally didn't. He wanted her out of there so while he knows Mr Dildopolis is a dick who should be taken down for doing that to Annie, it's a situation that Jeff can work to his advantage. I mean, he genuinely wants Annie there with him, but at the same time a part of it is that he's won that argument with Annie - he is still Jeff after all, competitive but not wanting to seem like it.

And you never know what we'll see with the living situation. He is so chivalrous giving up his bed and I think Annie will realize that. We'll see how it pans out in the next chapter.

Yes! That was the moment that Jeff totally fell head over heels for this kid. I wanted it to be really intimate and honest so I hope that came across. Annie will find it harder to resist Jeff's more obvious feelings for her.

Thanks again for reading my dear!x

[classicfreak]

Oh yeah, Jeff is definitely getting exactly what he wants, and he's semi-enjoying the process. Jeff is most definitely Jeff and he is perfect at it.

Annie is def. going to realize the heroic efforts put forth by Jeff and will return her gratitude "gratuitously"

Jeff is definitely in love with the little human growing in Annie.
Keep writing amazing chapters and I will never stop!

[leigh198910]

Awww, Jeff! I love how well you are writing Jeff's development while still keeping it very much in character. Any chance this new living arrangement will become permanent?
Can't wait for the next chapter!

[x_avecia_x]

Thank you so much for reading and as for the living arrangement, for now it will be the status quo but I don't plan on them staying together for long. We'll see though.

x

[x_avecia_x]

Haha, no worries, any comments whenever received are appreciated!

And I guess my goal is to make people sympathize with Jeff because he's definitely not the best guy in the world to drop such a bombshell on and expect him to give you the world but he is trying and I want my readers to feel for him so I'm glad you liked that.

Annie just needs to cheer up a bit doesn't she? I think she's had her mental breakdown about what's happened to her life and this will let each of them move on to just accept they are going to be together for the rest of their lives in one way, shape or form because of their kid.

Thanks again for reading x

[ndnickerson]

Yay! And I'm glad they didn't just fall into bed together when she came to stay with him. I like the slow development much better. ;)

[x_avecia_x]

Thanks, I love the slow burn aspect (trust me, this story will have it, I may hate MYSELF by the time I finally get them together - if at all!)

Thanks again for reading x