It Was The Smartest Thing I Ever Did, Because Now You're Here (8/?)

Jan 04, 2012 19:06

Title: It Was The Smartest Thing I Ever Did, Because Now You're Here
Author: x_avecia_x
Rating: PG-13
Warning: A few sweary words, nothing too shocking.
Word Count: 2,008
Disclaimer: I do not own Community - although I would totally marry Dan Harmon then claim half in our (inevitable) divorce settlement - that is unless he conceeds to my end game Jeff/Annie ( Read more... )

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crittab January 4 2012, 19:35:03 UTC
See? This is what pregnancy hormones should lead to, not all of that blame-Jeff-for-everything stuff.

I'm shameless in my efforts to have Jeff get laid as often as possible.

Another great chapter. I really, really love this fic.

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crittab January 4 2012, 20:09:17 UTC
A happy Jeff is a post-coital Jeff. That's just my take on the whole thing :P

Annie... I want her to get laid too, it just needs to be a little less 'quick and dirty' than getting Jeff laid needs to be.

Of course, if they're laying eachother, then it can be pretty much anything and I'm satisfied.

I've put way too much thought into this.

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x_avecia_x January 4 2012, 20:27:45 UTC
After reading your comments and obsessions about people getting laid I'm not sure it's Jeff that needs it! Just kidding, really.

But yes, Jeff does get what he wants here. I'm really really concerned that Jeff actively trying to get Annie to admit her feelings is the total opposite of how it would be knowing how tightly locked down Jeff keeps his thoughts and feelings, but it's just how this came out.

So am I right in thinking that I can put them through tremendous amounts of crap so long as they're both laying each other? yes?

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nyclove3 January 4 2012, 22:00:35 UTC
x_avecia_x January 4 2012, 22:08:45 UTC
Minds in the gutter indeed! Heehee ( ... )

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midtega January 4 2012, 23:23:41 UTC
Hello, just want to chime in here to say horray ur back and I love the chapter. I understand ur fear of ooc in regards to the story but how u write jeff, but I look at the whole thing as a whole and I say its natural progression for jeff to feel this way and ur doing it perfectly. The only thing I worry and this is the yin and yang of multi fic chapter j/a stories is the fear of wanting more or the thought that the story never gets done. Now there are longer multi fics that got done debate 110 and the only girl in the world comes to mind, but I hope u finish this through and through cuz it just got addicting.

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x_avecia_x January 4 2012, 23:29:26 UTC
Oh I enjoyed that little fanfare! Thank you and yes I can tell you this fic will be finished. I had planned on it being REALLY long but I think in total it will be 12 chapters long (all of the remaining chapter except the one after this one have been written already) with a sequel so as not to put too much pressure on myself. Overall there will be closure with this and i'll pick up where I leave off soon enough after that :) So I hope that eases your mind ( ... )

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fangirl_101 January 5 2012, 16:41:23 UTC
oh my god. I don't even have words. The intensity of the lead-in to the ending has turned me into an incoherent puddle. All I can say is update SOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!

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x_avecia_x January 6 2012, 12:42:11 UTC
Aww thank you! And update is here!

x

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classicfreak January 5 2012, 22:23:18 UTC
OHLAWD STRIKE ME DOWN!
I read this chapter yesterday but I was suffering from work induced laziness (I read this on my way home) and ate then went to bed so ... sorry!
As always AMAZING CHAPTER IS AMAZING!

JEFF YOU ARE NOT A HANDY MAN UNLESS THE TOOLS ARE HAIR PRODUCTS. JUST STOP LYING TO YOURSELF!
Annie, you need to BELIEVE in Jeff
BELIEVE!
JEFF Y ARE YOU SO ADORABLE. "... I actually got it for here." I was seriously floored at this line. There was a giant smile on my face and I was all "awee, look at you being adorable and shocking the shit out of Annie. YOU ARE SO CUTE MR ( ... )

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x_avecia_x January 6 2012, 12:58:37 UTC
You gif'd me!


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