Fic: Textual Healing (Part 2)

Feb 15, 2012 14:14


Title:  Textual Healing
Author: x_avecia_x
Spoilers:  I actually don't think there are any but let's play it safe and say everything up to 3.10.
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Does Angst count?  Maybe one or two sweary words but nothing too upsetting.
Word Count: 7,685
Disclaimer: I own nothing but a ridiculous obsession with this show.
Summary: Annie and Jeff have late ( Read more... )

community, fanfiction, jeff/annie

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nyclove3 February 15 2012, 23:41:36 UTC
x_avecia_x February 16 2012, 23:19:27 UTC
Thank you. Yeah, I was kind of deliberately leading the leaders in to who the wife was and I just could not make it Britta, she just wouldn't do that to Jeff, Michelle on the other hand worked pretty well.

I definitely wanted the idea of drifting to come across so I'm glad it made sense. It made me sad writing it to think that they would lose touch because I don't think Jeff is that shallow anymore to not care deeply about these people, but I think that Slater could be just that manipulative to get him to move on from them. I don't know, but Annie couldn't not somehow get Jeff thinking again about their connection and how much he cared about her.

And YES! ER was one of my all time favourite shows. I just had to work it in there with me making Annie a nurse. *sigh*

Thanks for reading :) x

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dearygirl February 16 2012, 06:14:29 UTC
Thank you for this!!!

As sad as it does make me I really do like the idea of Jeff and Annie drifting apart and then connecting later on in life when they've both matured a little. Of course it sucks that it takes a marriage ending but the way you've written them here, it's obvious that they're finally ready to be together.

I also knew there was a reason I hated Slater. Lol.

it’s because I’m not happy without you.

I know it was said under crappy circumstances but, GUH. THIS LINE.

And the texting was great! Texting in fic is always my favorite.

Thank you so much for writing this! I love it! Happy (belated) Valentines Day, to you!

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x_avecia_x February 16 2012, 23:36:54 UTC
You are welcome. I was so worried because it was a tad depressing for a fic exchange on the most romantic day of the year ( ... )

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sinecure February 17 2012, 06:30:43 UTC
Aww, how sweet. Although, bah, bad Slater! I liked her well enough in the show at first, but her disdain of Jeff's friends and their friendships right off the bat--asking if he's their babysitter--really turned me off of her. Other than that, I liked her, and then she dumped him for no reason, later claiming she was spooked, though I never bought that. So, I can absolutely believe that this is how things would turn out.

I say again, bad Slater!

I, too, love texting in Community fics. In other fics? Meh. But I've learned to embrace it in Community fics and love it beyond belief. I need to do an all texting fic or something.

Anyway, this is a great fic! I love that Jeff is the one pursuing the relationship. I'm a sucker for that in this fandom.

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x_avecia_x February 17 2012, 21:58:19 UTC
Ach, I didn't mind Slater that much, she just didn't know much about having fun, like...at all! Bad Slater indeed!

Yeah I'm not a massive fan of texting in other fics, but Community always seems to have fic writers capable of pulling it off (not saying I'm one of those writers but there are a few out there who have written awesome text fics).

So thanks for reading! And Jeff-For-The-Pursuit! x

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spanisheyes5 February 21 2012, 01:05:29 UTC
*sighs* I love the ending. Actually I enjoy the whole fic but the ending brought a smile to my face. (: I like the idea of them communicating via text. It works because Jeff's baby is his cell phone. Good job.

Happy President's Day (since it's no longer Valentine's Day)!

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x_avecia_x February 22 2012, 23:18:26 UTC
Thank you so much. I really appreciate you reading and commenting. I kind of missed President's Day but happy 23rd February!

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x_avecia_x February 24 2012, 21:18:45 UTC
Holy. Crap. I'm so SO pleased you liked this. Not wanting to sound all fan-girly but you're honestly I think my favourite MM fic writer and it's really made my night that you liked this. So thank you :)

*happy dance*

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