Primeval Fic - If...

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Title: If...
Author: Bella
Rating: G
Pairings: Gen
Summary: Is there any such thing as fate?
A/N: A belated (I prefer not to think about how belated) happy birthday to lukadreaming. This was supposed to be timey-wimey fic, but it somehow got away from me.

Comments

[reggietate]

That was an astonishingly good bit o' fic, my dear! Glad to see all that lambing hasn't blunted your literary skillz :-D I love the way it gradually all came together and made sense as the team finally formed, especially soldier!Jenny.

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Thank you! That's quite a relief to hear :) I find the idea of Jenny as a solider fascinating, for some reason.

[freddiejoey]

"Yet, there are moments - moments like chasing dodos around an industrial kitchen, like watching a pteranadon soaring free over a 21st century golf course, like walking in the past - when Abby looks at the team and feels certain that some things will always happen. Maybe the details might have been different in an alternate timeline, but essentially, some things are immutable.

It’s a good feeling, amidst all the uncertainty of the anomalies.

This is where they’re meant to be."

Wonderful fic!!

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Thank you!

[goldarrow]

That was fascinating - a different but entirely believable side/look at each character.
And a fate in that no matter what, they will end up a team.
Love how it started so disparate, and came together bit by bit.

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Thank you very much!

[natchris]

Enjoyed this utterly!!

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Thanks very much :)

[faye_dartmouth]

This is a really fascinating and engaging fic. One I'll definitely reread :)

[x_bellaitalia_x]

Thank you! Glad you liked :)