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lukadreaming December 30 2014, 19:05:42 UTC
Ohhhhhhhhhh! Stephen!

Great installment. I twitched in sympathy with Ryan all the way through the family Christmas. And there's such a strong air of melancholy surrounding him after the retirement decision.

And Joe the grumpy, farting lurcher is just brilliant!

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x_bellaitalia_x January 2 2015, 11:02:55 UTC
I had a lot of fun with Joe *g*

Thank you very much :)

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fredbassett December 30 2014, 21:34:19 UTC
Oh god, I howled laughing at the farting lurcher! One of mine had just let out a most sulpherous fart!

Ryan's relationship with the dog is great.

And meeting up with Stephen again is great. *happy sigh*

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x_bellaitalia_x January 2 2015, 11:03:50 UTC
*g* I live with a lurcher periodically and she produces the most incredible smells when she puts her mind to it!!

Thank you very much :)

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knitekat December 30 2014, 22:46:06 UTC
LOL over Joe, the old grump, esp at the pub.

Lovely for the boys to meet and reminice.

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x_bellaitalia_x January 2 2015, 11:02:21 UTC
Got to love a grumpy old dog! *g*

Thanks :)

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goldarrow December 30 2014, 23:20:30 UTC
And the brilliance continues...

and occasionally moaning his disapproval in Ryan’s left ear.
for some reason that made me snort tea out my nose...

He and Joe sit in the corner and observe. Ryan suspects they both look vaguely horrified.
the lurcher, sprawled on his back with his legs in a frog-like splay and snoring softly
the cloud of sullen resentment masquerading as his dog
he hasn’t been mortified by a fart since he joined the military, and so instead has to firmly squash a snigger.
Ryan suspects that two Olympic gold medals should be classified as more than ‘okay’.
“I haven’t had him long,” Ryan says. “Mostly, he sheds.” Stephen snorts beer out of his nose for a second time.

The bit about Lester and Lyle almost made me choke...

Love how the characters and connection are building.

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x_bellaitalia_x January 2 2015, 11:04:40 UTC
Thank you very much! Really glad you liked it :)

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kristen_mara January 2 2015, 04:00:29 UTC

I love all the relationships in this, even as I ache for them/their behaviour - they ring very true. And Ryan as a dog owner, hee

Ryan's scariest experience in his whole career - waking up during the night to face that One Direction poster... You cruel woman!

Yay re Stephen having got himself into a better situation and it paying off for him. (Though I am glad he and Cutter still do talk.) S & R's Christmases are looking up!

Brill!

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x_bellaitalia_x January 2 2015, 11:01:53 UTC
I'm not a dog person either, so it was easy to empathise with Ryan while writing this *g*

Hee, what can I say? (I've been struck by a horrible 1D obsession lately, and that reference just somehow appeared without me noticing...*g*)

Thanks!

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