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The Fiction He Lives - Part 3

Apr 30, 2010 01:51

Title: The Fiction He Lives - Part 3
Author: x_cheapnovelty
Pairing: Alex Gaskarth/Jack Barakat
Rating: M
Summary: Alex is the architect of Jack's despair.
POV: Third
Warnings: Angst, heartache, boykissing, boycrying
Disclaimer: Imaginary.
Author Notes: This is the last chapter. I made myself so upset writing it! But I'm pleased the way it turned out, so...
I hope you ( Read more... )

jack barakat, the fiction he lives, alex gaskarth, slash

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x_cheapnovelty April 29 2010, 22:55:01 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to finish it sad because real life isn't always happeh...
and I'm sorry I killed you.

prologue, huh?
I hadn't thought of that.

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x_cheapnovelty April 30 2010, 23:30:10 UTC

hahaha it's okay, prefixes are a tricky part of literature. Or do I mean grammar? Who cares.

hahaa epilogue will probably happen, then :)
prologue would be too happy for this story...

leighabelle April 29 2010, 22:04:21 UTC

You just broke my heart. Stabbed it, ripped it out of my chest, threw it on the ground, poured kerosene over it, lit it on fire, and placed it back in my chest to burn.

x_cheapnovelty April 29 2010, 22:56:43 UTC

That is one of the best descriptions of heartache/break I've heard! But I'm sorry I made you feel that way D:
and thank you ^^

rosettirose April 29 2010, 22:19:21 UTC

there are tears in my eyes. gosh, this is so sad.
the only thing he could do was crumble. He sank to the floor, clutching his chest, crying; just crying soundlessly
you're trying to break my heart, aren't you? ): you portrayed the emotions so well. i love this, so much, so i vote yes for a prologue. <3

x_cheapnovelty April 29 2010, 22:57:59 UTC

aww there were tears in mine as i was writing! haha
Sorry, but yes, yes I am.
I'm glad you liked it, and I'll seeee what happens in terms of epilogue/prologue.. :)

sausajizz April 29 2010, 23:53:24 UTC

i am ded.
completely and utterly.
there needs to be an epilogue and prologue and sequel and whatever else i can milk out of this because it is perfect and should never, ever end.

x_cheapnovelty April 30 2010, 23:32:25 UTC

ohhhhh no, please to be coming back to life?
I'm sorry. haha
awww thank you :) okay okay I think the epilogue shall be written, then.

fumbledtouchftw April 30 2010, 06:48:38 UTC

YESSSSS EPILOGUE! DO ONE, PLEAAAAASE.

x_cheapnovelty April 30 2010, 23:33:01 UTC

lol kay :)