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NYC Midnight Short Story Contest 2015 Round 2
Feb 02, 2017 22:56
This was my second-round story; I didn't make it to the third round (
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aloofball
February 4 2017, 00:29:44 UTC
I love the "standing in the shade of pretty" and the "it started with the kids" lines. Also, a writer being the same as a liar.
Again, you are so good at describing places. You really make the Aim to Please come to life.
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Again, you are so good at describing places. You really make the Aim to Please come to life.
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