[Fic:] Garden of Exile, Part Twelve

Aug 13, 2012 21:27

Title: Garden of Exile, Part Twelve
Pairing: KikwangxYoseob
Rating: PG 13
A/N:: So this is my newest creation, Kiseob again since I missed writing about them. Anyway, I hope you guys will like it. Don’t be afraid to let me know what you think. As always, comments are <33.
Summary: Yoseob is a steward, Kikwang a lost passenger. Can they get to ( Read more... )

part twelve, garden of exile, kiseob

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adrii1997 August 13 2012, 20:38:34 UTC
YAH THAT WAS SO COOOOL!! THIS STORY IS JUST EHADJFHRKDJFGNHJGDCJVHFD!!! Can't wait till the next chapter!!!! YAY they finally admited that they love each other!!! I just hope they don't break up or anything!!! Im so glad you update this so fast! Its been about a week or so! wow you're really fast!! please update quickly again! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!

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x_heartbeatss_x August 22 2012, 20:07:02 UTC
I'm really happy that you like it :D Yeah it was about time that they told each other that they love each other ;DD Don't worry, they won't break up!! Haha your welcome, I always do my best ^^
I just had some problems with my internet xD THANK YOU FOR LOVING MY STORY!!

The next chapter is up now and thank you very much for commenting!!♥

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itsjustjodie August 13 2012, 22:29:15 UTC
Omg the ending just gave me chills!!!!!!!!
Lol I loved how so easily close there getting, omg it reminds me of the guy I'm seeing.....
Lol bu anyway! I love this chapter! Fuck I love every chapter!
But yeah thanks a lot for the update :)

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x_heartbeatss_x August 22 2012, 20:08:37 UTC
Hehe don't worry about it ;D you don't have to think negative, everything will work out fine cause I love happy endings :D
Oh I'm happy for you sweetie! :DD
I'm really glad you love this!!
Yr welcome, thank you very much for commenting!♥

The next part is up now :D

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shiroyashaxiii August 20 2012, 12:02:20 UTC
YAY! THEY CONFESSED!! FINALLY!! ♥♥♥
GOSH, I love this so much! T^T
Ahw, they're so endless cute!
And it's so cute that Yoseob is reporting Hyunseung what's going on! *lol*
I'm curious what that surprise will be! *__*
But poor Kwangie! Please don't worry so much! You make Yoseob worry too and then you're all sad. I don't want KiSeob to be sad! T^T

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x_heartbeatss_x August 22 2012, 20:10:32 UTC
YES THEY DID :D
I'm so happy you dooo! ^^
hehe yes, he is one of his best friends after all ;D
xD that's a secret!
Aww, don't worry sweetie, they won't be, or at least won't stay sad!!! :D *hug!!!*
Thank you very much for commenting!♥♥

The next part is up now ;D

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onthetwack September 28 2012, 22:24:23 UTC
I. AM. SO. LATE! I'm sorry. I was very busy with the story I wrote for the Summer Big Bang and then my studies were calling again and blahblah... :(

But more important is: I'm reading this now and I still love this. I will try reading all the chapters you wrote as soon as possible. (OMG, what do I see? There is already an epilogue? *cries* So it'll be over soon *sniff*)

I loved it, I loved it, I loved it. Kiseob are very cute and I always get this warm, cozy feeling when they are all couple-ish together. It's just so right when they are a couple and fluffy and love each other!

The flashback was awesome. Poor Kikwang! I felt that I understand his character much better now. (And I am a flashback-junkie...which I probably mentioned before ;D)

I might have loved the beginning of this chapter most. The way Kikwang sleeps with his head on Yoseob's chest is such a beautiful scene to me. (I want them to cuddle all day.)

Good job, I hope I'll be able to read the other chapters soon too. <3333

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x_heartbeatss_x October 4 2012, 18:43:22 UTC
Hehe that's okay sweetie xD I understand, sometimes I wonder where I even find the time to write xD

I'm really glad you love it :D I hope you'll like the ending as well, yes it has already come to an end unfortunately ;p
I'm so glad you doo! Yes I think so too, they are just adorable together to me, I love every moment they have together.

Yes, I felt like it needed just one more xD I like flashbacks as well, they help tell the story a lot ^^
Aww thank you very much :D I like that scene a lot as well to be honest ^^

Thank you so much sweetie, I hope you'll be able to read them soon as well <33333.

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