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The Crane Wife: Chapter 8 of 8

Apr 27, 2010 17:03

Title: The Crane Wife
Chapter: Eight: Eight
Author: x_losRating: NC-17 ( Read more... )

the crane wife, five/master, series, fanfiction

Comments 59

aralias April 27 2010, 16:31:27 UTC

i knew you weren't doing work :P

x_losfic April 27 2010, 16:33:50 UTC

I WAS BEHBEH. But then I was like FINISH TIEEEEEM!!

aralias April 27 2010, 19:17:18 UTC

first thought first: i hope brax gets to be president after this, and strongly suspect that even in crane wife land it will never ever happenother things ( ... )

x_losfic April 27 2010, 21:19:40 UTC

1. You and Nadja both love you some Ultrapandas.
2. Your suggestion, behbeh.
3. *sigh* Stupid Dalek talking.
4. I'm glad that /works/,
5. You tried to edit it out twice.
6. Did not know that!
7. Ah, didn't know you thought it worked well. Excellent. And he would hardly have gone along with it if he didn't.
8. I thought he /did/ get to be President, but perhaps he doesn't. :(
9. I am thinking of some well sexy ones. With all due gravity.

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darklyenigmatic April 27 2010, 17:08:09 UTC

YES! Final installment! And so, so satisfying. I loved it. There were so many little bits I adored - Doctor coming to save Master, reconciliation, one of the hottest sex scenes I've ever read, and all the little references to the series - cosmos would be unpleasant without you, Oodsphere, DoctorMaster. Gah. So many I can't list them all here.

Really, truly adored this. Definitely something I will be reading again. And again. And again. :D *bookmarks*

x_losfic April 27 2010, 21:22:12 UTC

Glad you did! And am glad the sex bit worked--I was unsure about it. And I <3 the Oodsphere for the cheap joke about the Doctor and Donna accidentally getting married.

Thanks so much for liking it so much! :D

silvermoon_06 April 27 2010, 19:58:15 UTC

Another brilliant upate and final chapter! I enjoyed this one immensely! I was so happy to see the Doctor came back and rescued the Master. I loved their confrontation in the cell, that was so intense. When the Master grabbed him by his hair, and started berating him, and kissing him, I thought, oh, now he's in trouble ( ... )

x_losfic April 27 2010, 23:15:30 UTC

I'm glad you really liked it! :)

bagheera_san April 27 2010, 20:08:09 UTC

Yay! Happy Endings are rarely this entertaining, and it is indeed disgustingly happy, but also very entertaining.

Good stuff:
- THE DALEKS NEED NO ONE :D
- Ultra-pandas!
- Brax! Not being Sir not appearing in this story anymore!
- Nyssa and Tegan getting much better endings than they do in canon.
- Declarations of love with lots of conditions. Because fanfic is too often about unconditional love, and this was sweet and right and IC.
- Roma-romama :DD
- Eighties Movie Night. Somehow I love the idea of getting to see all the movies of the decade you live in - including the ones that don't exist yet. It would be so surreal to see pop-culture develop in fast forward.

This chapter is like a big happy grin.

x_losfic April 27 2010, 22:34:32 UTC

As an sadder alternate ending just for you: daleks fell and they all died? :p I'm surprised the schmoop didn't kill you, tbh ( ... )

tbsavafob6 April 27 2010, 22:57:03 UTC

I love it! Just love it. I'm going to miss this series. It was very well done. This series makes me very happy. It's just brilliant. That's the only way to describe it.*smiles*

x_losfic April 27 2010, 23:14:19 UTC

Well, there's more Five stuff in the pipe, but I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)

psifi872 April 28 2010, 03:16:10 UTC

This comment made me grin so much! I love your stories!