omg, omg~! (Agh~ This is gonna be a long comment, dude xD) I read the whole fic yesterday before I went to bed... I'm really upset now, because it was such a great one! D: and it's finished already.. I totally swallowed every word. I sat there for 2 hours and read every chapter without a break. xD I didn't look up from the computer even once... |D This is THE best fanfiction I have ever read! (and I have read a lot xDDD *has no hobbies*) The story is set up so well. Aa... I kinda cried at the end. I wanted Takeru to smile again.. but together with Chiyu, damn it Dx I totally love all the characters in this story! especially Yuuri. They way he talks really impressed me. You put a lot of thought into this, I guess. haha ("^-^)\\ Your writing style is epic. I loved every bit of this. brain candy, yey~ so here's a cookie made from pure epicness just for you! |D *gives you a huge and pink cookie with glitter on it* xD And the ending was pretty perfect ~ Though it was not what I had expected (WHICH IS GOOOOOD! *O* b )(and listening to
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I love long comments :DDDDD Thank you so much for the positive feedback, I love it ;; It makes me so happy to know someone likes my brainfarts so much. (Brainfarts, because the whole story really is one weird idea I got from having seen Katy Perry's music video for Hot'n'Cold too many times while suffering from insomnia and having spent all day long watching TV. xD) POSITIVE (or negative, who knows) THING is that I'm continuing this with a sequel's sequel. |D The third part is called Butterfly Science, and I've almost finished the first chapter, so you have something to look forwards to :D I hope it won't spoil the good though D; ALSO (this is something I've not talked about much yet), I'm possibly going to publish the first part of the story as a graphic novel sometime during next year or so :D /shameless advertising here. So please look forwards to all that's to come (and I promise to write more Hazuki x Yuuri, since I love writing Yuuri. xD)
Well, that's perfect then! XD~ Oh come on! This isn't a brainfart xD If your brainfarts look like this, you'd have 7 very intelligent brains xD~ (Praise the TV~ *bows to it* xD) Cool! :D I can't wait to bite into that x3 ~ *excited* I'll be so watching this community xD ahan~ That's a really cool idea :D haha, I really love the characters and the sroty here, so I was also thinking of drawing a Dōjinshi |D But having to draw takeru all the time, would freak me out... by the way... Yuuri -> Irokui Yuuri? XD~ aa~ I can't wait for all your stuff *___* ~ *drools over journal*
Hahaha, I wish I really had 7 brains, maybe that way I could memorize all the stuff at school instead of my brain being full after finishing a good novel. |D I've always wanted to publish a graphic novel since I wouldn't have the patience for a full manga (although I'd love to do that, I just can't bring myself to it xD). I figured I liked the story so much myself that I'd love to draw it, so throughout this year I've been doing some illustrations (there'll be 39 monotone images xDDDD) Yes! Irokui's awesome D; And it makes me sad there aren't many Irokui fanfics out there. :| ♥
... I really wanted to read something after 2 days of isolation and low tension brought by it, and it wasnt until today I realized that there's been 2 new chapters to this DDD:
And knowing you'd just make me cry with this I still read it and goddamnit you made me cry.
I mean Chiyu ---
You can't be this cruel just give them a happy ending will you ;----; Or I'll give you my swine flu.
Hrr swine flu, now you have something to really threaten me with :| No really, I have the next chapter waiting but I haven't had so much inspiration but I swear more'll come next week lolol, and I swear this'll end happily :|
NOOO~! you can't just stop here!! D: It's a really good story and and you can't just end it here, and what about Takeru, and what about the boston bag and umm i don't even know what i want to say XD Just update it soon!
and then you tricked me! i thought that when you wrote "there will be a happy ending" that Takeru would go get his bag and then they would talk or something and then live happily together to the day they die D: And then, i saw "In the future" >< how could you?! XD
Then i really like your writing style ^^ i've been reading the whole story twice by now, and love when you make the world sound so meaningless, like it would be better to just go die somewhere.
and for the last comment, you ruined my homework with this XD i am supposed to make a project for my exams not reading fanfics XD
(i know my formulation-something may be pretty bad, but i'm in a hurry *laughs*)
and please remember to update soon! XD cause i'm not gonna offer any cookies otherwise D:
Don't worry, it doesn't end here. In fact I had half a chapter for part three ready -- when my laptop crashed and I lost all my files. :/ So I've been slowly working on all this again.
I'm glad that the atmosphere I wanted to put emphasis on can be seen from it! During writing this I've tried (and try as I continue) to make Takeru clearly reflect that world-can-go-to-hell side while putting Chiyu to the opposite end... until he became depressed (laugh)
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I read the whole fic yesterday before I went to bed...
I'm really upset now, because it was such a great one! D: and it's finished already..
I totally swallowed every word. I sat there for 2 hours and read every chapter without a break. xD I didn't look up from the computer even once... |D This is THE best fanfiction I have ever read! (and I have read a lot xDDD *has no hobbies*) The story is set up so well.
Aa... I kinda cried at the end. I wanted Takeru to smile again.. but together with Chiyu, damn it Dx
I totally love all the characters in this story! especially Yuuri. They way he talks really impressed me. You put a lot of thought into this, I guess. haha ("^-^)\\
Your writing style is epic. I loved every bit of this. brain candy, yey~
so here's a cookie made from pure epicness just for you! |D *gives you a huge and pink cookie with glitter on it* xD
And the ending was pretty perfect ~ Though it was not what I had expected (WHICH IS GOOOOOD! *O* b )(and listening to ( ... )
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Thank you so much for the positive feedback, I love it ;; It makes me so happy to know someone likes my brainfarts so much. (Brainfarts, because the whole story really is one weird idea I got from having seen Katy Perry's music video for Hot'n'Cold too many times while suffering from insomnia and having spent all day long watching TV. xD)
POSITIVE (or negative, who knows) THING is that I'm continuing this with a sequel's sequel. |D The third part is called Butterfly Science, and I've almost finished the first chapter, so you have something to look forwards to :D I hope it won't spoil the good though D;
ALSO (this is something I've not talked about much yet), I'm possibly going to publish the first part of the story as a graphic novel sometime during next year or so :D /shameless advertising here.
So please look forwards to all that's to come (and I promise to write more Hazuki x Yuuri, since I love writing Yuuri. xD)
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Oh come on! This isn't a brainfart xD If your brainfarts look like this, you'd have 7 very intelligent brains xD~ (Praise the TV~ *bows to it* xD)
Cool! :D I can't wait to bite into that x3 ~ *excited* I'll be so watching this community xD ahan~
That's a really cool idea :D haha, I really love the characters and the sroty here, so I was also thinking of drawing a Dōjinshi |D But having to draw takeru all the time, would freak me out... by the way... Yuuri -> Irokui Yuuri? XD~
aa~ I can't wait for all your stuff *___* ~
*drools over journal*
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I've always wanted to publish a graphic novel since I wouldn't have the patience for a full manga (although I'd love to do that, I just can't bring myself to it xD). I figured I liked the story so much myself that I'd love to draw it, so throughout this year I've been doing some illustrations (there'll be 39 monotone images xDDDD)
Yes! Irokui's awesome D; And it makes me sad there aren't many Irokui fanfics out there. :|
♥
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And knowing you'd just make me cry with this I still read it and goddamnit you made me cry.
I mean Chiyu ---
You can't be this cruel just give them a happy ending will you ;----;
Or I'll give you my swine flu.
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No really, I have the next chapter waiting but I haven't had so much inspiration but I swear more'll come next week lolol, and I swear this'll end happily :|
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I'll mail it to you with your Keru!chain.
But
>:(
Hurry up.
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I will orz;;
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you can't just stop here!! D:
It's a really good story and and you can't just end it here, and what about Takeru, and what about the boston bag and umm i don't even know what i want to say XD
Just update it soon!
and then you tricked me!
i thought that when you wrote "there will be a happy ending" that Takeru would go get his bag and then they would talk or something and then live happily together to the day they die D:
And then, i saw "In the future" ><
how could you?! XD
Then i really like your writing style ^^
i've been reading the whole story twice by now, and love when you make the world sound so meaningless, like it would be better to just go die somewhere.
and for the last comment, you ruined my homework with this XD
i am supposed to make a project for my exams not reading fanfics XD
(i know my formulation-something may be pretty bad, but i'm in a hurry *laughs*)
and please remember to update soon! XD
cause i'm not gonna offer any cookies otherwise D:
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I'm glad that the atmosphere I wanted to put emphasis on can be seen from it! During writing this I've tried (and try as I continue) to make Takeru clearly reflect that world-can-go-to-hell side while putting Chiyu to the opposite end... until he became depressed (laugh)
Stay tuned☆
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