Migraine Coma chapter 2: Paracusia

Feb 23, 2010 21:48

Title: Migraine Coma: "Paracusia"
Chapter: #2/#?
Author: rookie_cherii
Band/Pairing: Chiyu x Takeru (SuG)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: some obscurely described sex.
Summary: Chiyu has found a new path to follow and his life seems to be back on track. Then, an unexpected incident pulls him into the nights of Tokyo, and back to the blackest eyes of the boy he thought ( Read more... )

「migraine coma, 「mimetic word, →chiyu x takeru, ★fanfic

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harucchi February 24 2010, 04:23:47 UTC
Ohhh Takeru you're so evil xDDD
Poor Chiyu. Next thing you know he'll be told to sleep with yuji |DDDDDDDD

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keyllastic February 24 2010, 16:36:18 UTC
LOL maybe not that.. xD

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miso_nya February 24 2010, 13:23:14 UTC
*HAPPY DANCE*

now off to read the chapter xDD

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keyllastic February 24 2010, 18:42:34 UTC
xDD Have fun.

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funkyfreshdays7 February 24 2010, 18:29:13 UTC
I dunno why but it reminds me of Murakami
And it's very good.

And I'm very stupid because I didn't realise it's the 2nd chapter until I'd finished reading it.

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keyllastic February 24 2010, 18:42:20 UTC
I read a lot of Murakami - both Haruki and Ryu - so it's not really a surprise if some bits and pieces of their style affect mine... |D

If you haven't read them yet, to get most out of this check out the first two parts: Hot n Cold and Mimetic Word. (I forget who I've seen commenting on all the entries. :x)

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funkyfreshdays7 February 24 2010, 19:29:56 UTC
Your writing is addictive. I've spent nearly an hour reading it and it looks like I'm going to do this for many hours to come. No school tomorrow luckily XD
I'm so tired of pointless fanfic that looks like the author wrote it in 10 minutes without stopping to think about the storyline. Your stories are like separate worlds, with so many layers and connections and...I don't even know what...but it's even better than most books that on sale out there ~~

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keyllastic February 24 2010, 19:53:05 UTC
Wow, thank you! :D It's always so heartwarming to get this sort of feedback♪

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super_nyaaa February 25 2010, 20:29:20 UTC
damn, now you ruined my concentration on my homework again XD both yesterday and today hahaha ( ... )

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keyllastic February 26 2010, 20:34:07 UTC
Thank you so much for the thoughts, I love long comments. (laugh) It's nice to hear that all the research and experience I've poured into the story as a whole is paying off! Still, funnily enough I still think of myself as more of a fantasy writer. I think I need to work to change that seeing as I mostly write contemporary realism nowadays |D

Don't worry, I dislike writing in Finnish (and Swedish even more |D) because I always feel I can't put as much emotion and emphasis to Finnish as I put in English and the little Japanese I ever write.

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funkyfreshdays7 February 26 2010, 17:21:54 UTC
I was planning to write this on your next entry, BUT I JUST CAN'T WAIT.
OMFG I just finished Mimetic Word and I...I dunno what to say. Because it was so unbelievably good. I love how you mix real-life facts with your own imagination, the result being so very realistic that I can actually see the characters behaving like that in real life... the story replays in my head, I'm constantly thinking stuff like "Oh no Chiyu don't do that", "Omfg Takeru I'll bite you if you don't change your mind" "Koki, please help him" etc
I'm happy and sad at the same time now XD Glad because I just read the best fanfic and sad because it ended and I have to waaait until I get to read the next parts. Oh and I'm sad because of Takeru, too. You portray these people so well, with so much life and energy, that I've come to love or hate them (depending on their personality) even though they're made up.

And your icon is so cute. I love the icons you've made of SuG and Takeru . Especially the Hadashi no mama one and the 39GalaxyZ gifs

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keyllastic February 26 2010, 20:30:41 UTC
I'll do my best to update fast! I'm really happy to get so much positive feedback. I do a lot of research and use my own experience when writing to create the most realistic surroundings and characters possible - yet, funnily enough, I'm mostly a fantasy writer than a contemporary realistic one!

Thank you! I don't find the energy to make so many graphics these days, sadly. I had most of my icons posted up to glass_x_wings but various events lead to me having them removed from the community... I should post all the old stuff over here.

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