Comments | x_miroku: SparklingRebels.

x_miroku

SparklingRebels.

Jul 13, 2008 19:11

"Shou!" His mother called him from downstairs, again. "Shouu!!" She repeated.

Shou was busy studying and his mother always called him to do the dirty jobs in the house.

"No!" He yelled back. "I'm busy with school and will not do the laundry OR the dishes mom!" He sighed in frustration and tried to focus on the books and papers in front of him. ( Read more... )

work, nc-17, saga, shou, request, daily life, sparklingrebels, fanfic

Comments 35

elenilovesyou July 15 2008, 14:59:40 UTC

omg this was hot *~* and cute

but you know, when you have your lip pierced you shouldn't kiss or have oral sex for like a month, just to make sure :)

elenilovesyou July 15 2008, 15:03:08 UTC

aaaand I forgot, I have always wanted to be someone's beta reader ...just felt like saying ^^"

x_miroku July 15 2008, 16:09:41 UTC

Whooeww SankYuu!! ^_^
They had their liprings already but both took them out of their lips... So Shou && Saga put them back in again.
But still. I didn't know that about piercings! Hahaha. Thanks for letting me know =D.

&& thanks ^__^
...
REALLY?! But is your native language English if I may ask?...
=DD!

elenilovesyou July 15 2008, 16:32:55 UTC

ummm no it's not. is it obvious? sorry :S

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shia_kyuu July 15 2008, 16:03:40 UTC

I love Shou's grandmother X333
This was cute and hot together. xD
But oooh, when Shou's mom sees them...

x_miroku July 15 2008, 16:10:46 UTC

Hahah Yeah she's so playful xD..
Thanks ^_^!
&& Yep, they wouldn't survive this..

charlotte8888uk July 16 2008, 00:15:56 UTC

this was so good! such a funny/cute ending too!

i wouldn't mind being a beta reader for you. i've never done it before but my native language is english, so it's up to you. :)

x_miroku July 16 2008, 19:36:38 UTC

Ahww thank you so much!! ^__^.

*_*. Really?! OMGod, that rocks. ♥
I'm busy on writing another one at the moment, I hope it will be finished soon.
Is it okay to exchange emails? ^__^ && Maybe I can add you on msn as well =3, I will screen the next comment if you post your email, so don't worry ;D! ^^
♥

charlotte8888uk July 16 2008, 21:33:41 UTC

x_miroku July 17 2008, 08:38:26 UTC

Okay I see.
I don't use skype unfortunately.
But I will email you anyway ^^

Haha Ok, that's great! Great uni you go to ._.!
Thank you so much.
♥

angie_valo July 19 2008, 22:04:21 UTC

Noa I love it ^////////////^
so hot!!!! and it was a really good first smut
you should write the sequel XD please i want to know how would shou mother react XD
they would be so grounded 8D
-i had read this before but i didn't commet *bad me*-
ohh, and you change you layout again, did you made it by yourselve?

x_miroku July 20 2008, 17:52:50 UTC

Woaaaa I am SO glad you like it~!!!
And thank you VERY much!! ♥

Should I? Ok, later then! Hehehheee. Then hell would really REALLY start.... ._.'
It's ok! Haha.
True! Yes I did it myself ^^!