'Til I Hit the Ground

Sep 28, 2008 14:22


'Til I Hit the Ground

Word Count:  ~2600
Pairing:  Dean/Charlotte (Het)
Rating:  NC-17 (Sex, Language)
Feedback: Absolutely. Concrit is always welcome.
Disclaimer:  The Winchester boys aren't mine but I'd make Dean wear his boots all of the time if they were.
Spoilers/Warnings:  None.
A/N: Written for the lovely embroiderama based on a prompt for the ( Read more... )

genre: teen!chesters, genre: het, genre: au, rating: nc-17, pairing: dean/ofc, series: strange angels, challenge: spn_het_love

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starpixie16 September 28 2008, 21:14:09 UTC
This was excellent and so very hot. Dean and Charlotte are a fantastic pairing ... adorable yet kinky. ;)

And, oh my god, did I ever feel embarrassed for poor Charlotte leaving her panties in the elevator! *lol*

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elanurel September 28 2008, 23:44:17 UTC
*is blushing*

I don't know why, but I'm feeling more drawn to writing little missing scenes from the College!AU. ;-P

I did feel bad writing it. I am forever sacrificing Charlotte's dignity on the altar of funny for a lot of my stories. But it was so Charlotte to realize what had happened and run like hell...

I am so happy that you enjoyed it!

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elanurel September 28 2008, 23:46:43 UTC
*twirls you*

I think my favorite line is the one about Charlotte's highlighters. ;-P

Dean/Charlotte is scorching, darling.

*is blushing*

I intended for it to get dirtier but sometimes they tend to skew towards the sweet. I hesitate to call it schmoop...

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elanurel September 28 2008, 23:52:13 UTC
*twirls you*

That's as much because of y'all as it is of me.

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now i have the song stuck in my head. quirkies September 28 2008, 22:51:48 UTC
dean/charlotte smut is good for the soul. seriously. they're so sexy and hot together but there's this ever-present affection - totally a kink of mine - that makes the pr0n about risk and trust and losing themselves (even the self-conscious and harming bits of themselves) to each other. you know? even when the hotness is restricting some of the blood flow to my brain i never lose sight of who these two are and what they mean to each other. you do that with their voices and the adorable details but also with the sexin'.

ok, now i have to get some more work done. is there any chance you can help me out with further motivation?

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Re: now i have the song stuck in my head. elanurel September 28 2008, 23:55:08 UTC
You know, your comments always make me blush - you see so much of what I intended to write and always worry comes across like I'm pounding the reader's head with the hammer of exposition. The whole 'verse is built on their feelings for each other, which they both express in different ways, but, yeah... I don't think they would be nearly so much fun to write if it was just about the sex.

I think I am truly incapable of writing PWP...

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miconic September 28 2008, 22:58:44 UTC
Oh. They made me laugh, and I apologise if that's not what you're looking for. entertaining as always, thanks for sharing the fic. The hijinks these two get into....

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elanurel September 28 2008, 23:59:07 UTC
Oh, no. It was supposed to make people laugh. ;-P

I very much needed the break from my current WIP, which is emotionally draining to write. And the prompt sort of lent itself to the hijinks that ensued. It's always poor Charlotte whose dignity I sacrifice on the altar of the funny...

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!

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