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When All Logic Grows Cold

Nov 22, 2008 12:01

When All Logic Grows Cold

Word Count: ~3000
Characters: Dean/Charlotte (Het)
Rating: NC-17
Feedback: Concrit is always welcome.
Disclaimer: The Winchester boys aren't mine but I'd make Dean wear his boots all of the time if they were.
Spoilers/Warnings: None. Takes place in an existing 'verse. I think it works as a stand-alone piece ( Read more... )

genre: het, genre: au, rating: nc-17, pairing: dean/ofc, series: strange angels

Comments 21

geekgirl33 November 23 2008, 05:14:00 UTC

I totally like this. The image I got of Dean shooting a giant bug and it exploding all over him is priceless.
I really did like it. no squeamishness at all.
And thanks for the Cuthulu shout out. Next time you are in Wisconsin I'll drive you guys up the the August Derleth Bridge.

elanurel November 23 2008, 20:53:03 UTC

The image I got of Dean shooting a giant bug and it exploding all over him is priceless.

That was really why I used the premise of a giant bug. I figured the humor worked more effectively than something angsty - because, damn, these two can angst. I actually enjoy writing them funny. ;-P

And I'm thrilled that you liked it.

msninacat November 23 2008, 06:29:09 UTC

Wow. I don't know how I'm supposed to leave a comprehensive comment after reading that. I love Charlotte and Dean. The little touches of Sam in there are nice too. :D You are amazing. I really can't make my brain cooperate anymore than this. You melted it.

elanurel November 23 2008, 20:55:05 UTC

Thank you so much!

One of the things that I do promise myself when writing this 'verse (well, in all of them, but this 'verse in particular) is that Sam is as viable a presence as the other characters. In SA, he's the driving force behind the main storyline... And I know he and Charlotte care about each other just as much as Dean and Charlotte care about each other, albeit in different ways.

But I digress.

And you totally have me blushing, by the way. ;-P

embroiderama November 23 2008, 15:10:11 UTC

I just re-read this and it put a big smile on my face. I love it!

elanurel November 23 2008, 21:02:27 UTC

*twirls you*

It's amazing how all it takes to make your day better is green giant bug goo.

pheebs1 November 24 2008, 20:48:09 UTC

Hot Hot! And I love these two together. Boinking, aw!! Heh!

elanurel November 25 2008, 02:17:13 UTC

*twirls you*

You know the word "boink" had to make an appearance. It is Charlotte, after all. And I'm thrilled that you love them together.

maisfeeka November 25 2008, 00:34:45 UTC

Oh, very nice! Loved it!

elanurel November 25 2008, 02:17:22 UTC

Danku! ;)