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x_strangeangels

This little bed can barely hold

Feb 22, 2009 23:39

This little bed can barely hold

Word Count: 3079
Pairing(s): Dean/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Feedback: Concrit is always welcome.
Disclaimer: The Winchester boys aren't mine but I'd make Dean wear his boots all of the time if they were.
Spoilers/Warnings: None
A/N: Written for the Celebrations challenge at spn_het_love. Just a little mea culpa for those ( Read more... )

genre: teen!chesters, genre: het, rating: nc-17, pairing: dean/ofc, challenge: spn_het_love, genre: pre-series

Comments 42

musesfool February 23 2009, 07:13:07 UTC

This is lovely - hot and wistful.

elanurel February 23 2009, 19:06:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I was more worried about the wistful than the hot - it was definitely not the story I started out writing. ;)

tabularassa February 23 2009, 07:26:03 UTC

I really loved this. Oh, Dean. He just breaks my heart, no matter what he's doing.

BEAUTIFUL. "But when she was stretched out underneath him, breathing his name into the curve of his neck, nothing mattered but the way she scratched down his back." Yeah:)

elanurel February 23 2009, 19:07:19 UTC

*twirls you*

This was harder to write than it was initially supposed to be. Guess I have a soft spot in my heart for Dean's coming of age...

And you made me blush to boot.

tabularassa February 23 2009, 22:20:36 UTC

"I have a soft spot in my heart for Dean's coming of age..."

♥

elanurel February 23 2009, 23:01:01 UTC

Sam, too. I think that's why I'm writing so much pre-series stuff right now... ;)

pheebs1 February 23 2009, 17:09:11 UTC

Ah lovely

elanurel February 23 2009, 19:15:22 UTC

*smishes you*

Thank you so much, Pheebs!

quellefromage February 23 2009, 19:13:55 UTC

Branni got her groove back!! Whee.

Hot and sweet. Did I mention hot?

Love this.

elanurel February 23 2009, 19:21:41 UTC

*is blushing*

I was hoping I hadn't quite lost the porn!fu, though I confess that I cut some of the sex. Damn that whole thing with plot anyway. ;)

And your icon made me laugh out loud.

*mwah*

try to say "loofah thief" five times quickly quirkies February 23 2009, 21:40:22 UTC

a cry as rough as the Impala roaring down a back road
that is one of my favorite lines in fandom. seriously. impala images during dean sexin' is just... &hearts.

Re: try to say "loofah thief" five times quickly elanurel February 23 2009, 22:59:40 UTC

*is blushing*

I have to confess that I was hoping to make his descriptions of things as, well, "Dean" as I make Alice's descriptions in the larger story. So... ;)