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x_strangeangels

This little bed can barely hold

Feb 22, 2009 23:39

This little bed can barely hold

Word Count: 3079
Pairing(s): Dean/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Feedback: Concrit is always welcome.
Disclaimer: The Winchester boys aren't mine but I'd make Dean wear his boots all of the time if they were.
Spoilers/Warnings: None
A/N: Written for the Celebrations challenge at spn_het_love. Just a little mea culpa for those ( Read more... )

genre: teen!chesters, genre: het, rating: nc-17, pairing: dean/ofc, challenge: spn_het_love, genre: pre-series

Comments 42

geekgirl33 February 26 2009, 04:49:05 UTC

Thank you!

elanurel February 26 2009, 06:49:01 UTC

You're very welcome! ;)

lynzibell February 26 2009, 05:53:36 UTC

Very nice! Thanks for sharing!

elanurel February 26 2009, 06:49:41 UTC

You're welcome! Thank you so much. ;)

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Re: starting with my favorite bits... elanurel March 1 2009, 19:28:22 UTC

Thank you, my lovely!

I have missed writing these two for a long time, and it just kind of clicked when I saw the prompt. So... I've already finished two sections in Chapter Six (and seriously edited them) and, with any luck, I'll get back on the writing horse next week.

I've been sick for awhile, so I haven't been forcing myself to write. ;)

alexandra_08 March 2 2009, 04:52:32 UTC

Finally! I settled down to properly read your story, excited I was to see a piece by you! At first, the tag line (like mother like daughter, like father like son) made me think it was Your Sorrow for Another Coin, but apparently it isn’t, but then again, it is… It’s a parenthesis, an extension from the story. As you mention at the end, I believe the style is not exactly the same? Anyway, so pleased I am!

"You and your goddamn boots," she muttered.
Heh. You seem to have a thing for boots, not just for Dean’s, I think.

he would tease her with nothing but his mouth until those nipples of hers were wet and red and shiny; still begging to be sucked even when the curve of her neck was close enough to kiss.
Oh dear… That goddamn mouth of his… On nipples…

Teasing and soft with each other. As Dean has been shown so far to be rather playful and gentle, though I’m sure he could be as you want him to be.

pussy clenching around his knuckles with a salty swell and a cry as rough as the Impala roaring down a back road.That line just hit me. The ( ... )

elanurel March 4 2009, 19:24:11 UTC

See, I love your feedback so much I hold onto it for a couple of days before I respond...

I am somewhat notorious for writing little vignettes that take place in a larger story, and this was something that just popped into my head when I saw the challenge over at spn_het_love. Of course, mine came in well over the 350 word limit we had imposed on the challenge but I am wholly unrepentant about that.

Heh. You seem to have a thing for boots, not just for Dean’s, I think.

Guilty as charged. One of my OFCs, Charlotte, is always wearing combat boots no matter what she is wearing. It was an homage to River Tam from Firefly because the character in question is an empath, and I thought it was neat.

Plus, it was boots.

Teasing and soft with each other. As Dean has been shown so far to be rather playful and gentle, though I’m sure he could be as you want him to be.I think what I like the best about this story is that some of the walls that he's built up to protect himself aren't quite there yet... Or, even if they are there, what she gets to see ( ... )