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Paralyzed by Love

Nov 04, 2008 20:29

Title: Paralyzed by Love
Author: x_tired_crazy_x
Paring: Benji/Joel
Summary:Joel left Benji to have a family. It's been two years since they've spoken and now Joel realizes he wants his brother back. Instead of acting upon his desires, he disappears from the world. When he finally comes to his senses, is it too late? ((So cheesy, but you gotta love it...)
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paralyzed by love, fiction, joel, benji/joel

Comments 8

writefiction November 5 2008, 16:23:28 UTC

heart-breaking and beautiful.

x_tired_crazy_x November 5 2008, 21:35:18 UTC

thank you darlin...

finy November 5 2008, 20:22:59 UTC

aww,this is sweet. I like it.
I haven't read any GC slash in quite a while and got kinda frustrated with all the badly written fiction there is but this is amazing.
Thank you!

x_tired_crazy_x November 5 2008, 21:34:42 UTC

thank you!!!

metalhead_00 November 6 2008, 02:51:59 UTC

GLORIOUS! :)

x_tired_crazy_x November 6 2008, 12:42:18 UTC

i love that word. Thanks!

greenpants59 November 6 2008, 06:29:09 UTC

“If I…” The giant rock in his throat makes his voice sound so much weaker than he wish it did… He clears it, but it doesn’t do much to help. “If I wanted to come crawling back…” he says, reliving the horrid memory once again. “Would you… be there?” he asks.

It takes less than a second for Benji to pull Joel back within the safety of his arms. He places a chaste kiss on his twin’s neck and just holds him as tight as he can. It takes a moment, but Joel’s body eventually moves with him as he squeezes his brother back. “I’m so sorry…” he begins to cry. “So sorry…”

Duuude. Seriously. This was so sweet. I absolutely loved it.

It totally made me smile. :]
Cheers!

x_tired_crazy_x November 6 2008, 12:41:47 UTC

mission accomplished then. Thanks!