Born in the Month of Mae (Chapters 1-3)

Apr 12, 2007 11:19


I told some people that I would post up stuff that I was writing. So here's my story, the first three chapters. Feel free to critique it and such.

Chapter 1

"She's beautiful.” I said. You know that, right?" I asked Josh.

He nodded, taking one hand off the steering wheel, wiping away the tear forming in his eye. "I wish we could raise her, you know ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 2

rightoutside April 12 2007, 18:35:37 UTC
finish this!
i wanna read the rest of it when you're done.
you're a terriffic writer!
:]

Reply

x_uncensored April 13 2007, 22:55:38 UTC
thank you <3333
I have SO much more to it (about 27 pages in Word)
so I'll most more of it later!
thanks for reading itttt

Reply


Leave a comment

Up