I told some people that I would post up stuff that I was writing. So here's my story, the first three chapters. Feel free to critique it and such.
Chapter 1
"She's beautiful.” I said. You know that, right?" I asked Josh.
He nodded, taking one hand off the steering wheel, wiping away the tear forming in his eye. "I wish we could raise her, you know
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i wanna read the rest of it when you're done.
you're a terriffic writer!
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I have SO much more to it (about 27 pages in Word)
so I'll most more of it later!
thanks for reading itttt
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