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chloe1910 December 13 2007, 03:49:54 UTC
Aw..I love how you contrast the whole 4 scenarios..night to morning(Jaemin) and dancing to singing(Yunchun)..this sounds a little melancholic...but it's beautiful nonetheless..

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x_voracity December 13 2007, 04:22:09 UTC
(opps wrong account before)
but yes, i'm glad you liked it and that the contrasts worked for you~♥ :)

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milena_1980 December 13 2007, 06:30:29 UTC
These just take my breath away <3
The Jaemin ones are beautiful, moon vs. sun, so sad, in a way.

don't drop me, yunho. my heart is tired of being dropped.

This hurt a bit, so beautiful, all four drabbles are.

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x_voracity December 13 2007, 06:31:41 UTC
well, the moon and the sun never meet :'( -- why did you make me think that ;__;

i'm glad you liked them, dear & thanks for commenting♥

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onew December 13 2007, 17:49:43 UTC

yoochun's hand tightens around yunho's at every twist and turn.
and yunchun dance their way to each other. :D

don't drop me, yunho. my heart is tired of being dropped.
yunho's the master of dancing. he won't dare miss a step and let chunnie fall. :D great works as usual! :D

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x_voracity December 13 2007, 17:54:06 UTC
and yunchun dance their way to each other. :D
HEEEEE~ yes. except chun is trying to dance his way away sometimes XD

ho will love the chun very lovely-ly!~ 8D
thank you :DD♥

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toma_love December 14 2007, 00:01:30 UTC
that was beautiful, both of them were. i think i'm gonna go check out the other ones if you have any XD

keep up the good work ya hear?

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x_voracity December 14 2007, 00:15:08 UTC
there are others but i think you've read them? 8) if not they;re organized by the tags i have

thank you so much :) i've recently started writing after a long period of writer's block ^^

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toma_love December 14 2007, 00:16:29 UTC
ahh writer's block... the death of a writer. heck i shall find them and read them once again lol... dbsk can never tire me no matter how many times i've read them XD

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kratynoi December 17 2007, 05:20:19 UTC
Those were beautifully gorgeous. I loved how each story mirrored the one before it. Sun and Moon...Singing and Dancing. ^^ ♥ Very well done.

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x_voracity December 17 2007, 05:21:01 UTC
♥thank you~ I wanted a parallelism of sorts after the first two kind of just leaked out of my fingers 8)

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