Hellmouth chapter 9

[xadie]

Sorry it's taken me so long to update, life has has been weirdly hectic. Here at last is chapter 9: 'The Puppet Show'. Hope you like.

In case you've completely forgotten everything that went before, due to my slackness, the first three chapters and warnings are here, the fourth and fifth chapters and cover are here, chapter 6 is here, chapter 7 is

Comments

[bohemiangel]

wow...brutal, but brilliant as ever.

‘Cos I am this close to turning you loose in the rughead pen and tellin’ ‘em there’s a sale on fairy cakes, you get me?”

I love that line...SO T-Bag

You know that you posted it to your regular journal not the community right?

[xadie]

Oops, I did that completely wrong. Erk - must fix...

[bandaged_doll]

This is really good! Chapter 8 has definitely been my favorite so far, but this one is a close 2nd.

I especially like the conversation between Maytag and Sara(h?) and how you refered to him as Jason when T-Bag wasn't around.

I could easily see T-Bag doing that to someone. Very good!

[the2weirdo]

This is absolutely breath-taking. Your characterisation is flawless, your style is brilliant - c'est perfection, defined.
Please, please, please continue!