When all else fails...

Sep 15, 2006 12:17


"There's too much at risk here General, we can't possibly keep the troops up against this army!"
The general turned to his soldier, the faceplate of his helmet hiding his dissapointment.

"No lieutenent, this outpost is too important the the Empire. Center of trade, the old capital. We can't let this fall without fighting! We stand, against all odds."
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angelbluekisses September 16 2006, 02:21:03 UTC
interesting....i don't like this one as much as some of the others but it's still good.

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xaeroshogun September 16 2006, 02:33:30 UTC
It's because I introduced actual dialog isn't it?
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angelbluekisses September 16 2006, 04:47:20 UTC
no, it's because it's got more war stuff than before...
if that makes sense....

ah, i'll just blame my mood.

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xaeroshogun September 16 2006, 04:49:07 UTC
More action?
Lol.
I write full stories.
Though I doubt this one is going to have any major love going on in it.

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