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Just to help me out squaring away teams and such. Ace isn't actually on the team when my short story takes place, but I didn't plan that until....this morning. I still have to set up a timeline...which should be fun, as you can see from all the blanks for where dates are supposed to go.
( ONWARD )
( ONWARD )
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They certainly seem far more dynamic now than earlier, but then we've gained a lot of experience writing since the first incarnations of the Hack Squad. I can see the DC flavor you've been giving to them; it definitely has a different feel but I'm looking forward to seeing what's going on with them in this universe on this team.
I also liked the piece you posted on Arcadia. I'll have to go back and reread it to get more detailed, but I thought you showed Kimmi's frustration and Hack's cluelessness quite well. I feel like there could have been a couple more setting elements to the short story- a hint more description- but we all know I'm a description addict, so that could just be my personal style leaking out there. Overall an awesome job.
-hides muffins in box and puts bow on it-
Yays! Good job!
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Yeah, I've broken away from the way we used to do powers on Xavier's/Red Dawn, mainly because I know what they can do and this was just a little cute piece I was intending to stick with my story project. I think if I came up with the journal/government files idea earlier than I may have devised a way to meld these in. Oh well.
I can see the DC flavor you've been giving to them
Haha I wouldn't exactly say that, but yeah I've been reading DC nonstop for about year so I think my brain quite likes the idea of multiple powers. Then again I just listed everything instead of just sticking to their basic ability like we tend to do in Rps because a) I'd prolly forget who was invulnerable/flier and b) It fit with the theme of how L.E.D.G.E knows everything.
Though I did just realize that I didn't update everyone to being on the LEDGE team now....eh I'll get to that I guess.
I thought you showed Kimmi's frustration and Hack's cluelessness quite well.Yeah, this scene just sort of came ( ... )
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