Story Part 1. Revised! Editing tips if you may!?

[xalienxxguitarx]

 Surrounded in a pitch black emptiness. Covered in a veil of forlornness. I have been to the front and back of life. I have roamed to the fathomless depths of the good and bad. My life has seen what it's like to live in an all-embracing circle. There is nothing more to see. I don't believe things can be any better than what great was, or any worse

Comments

[crymsongoddess]

*hugs* Someone reads these. I read all of them, you know...

[xalienxxguitarx]

Thank you, I am still in need of editing, plus I need to change names in the actual story.