Baby It's Cold Outside

[xallegedlyx]

Title: Baby It's Cold Outside
Author: xallegedlyx
Pairing: Puck/Kurt
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Puck always liked running. Sometimes it's running away. Sometimes it's running towards.
Disclaimer: Do not own, do not sue.

Comments

[lezi]

I loved this! Lovelovelove.

Puck's internal musings and his natural way of cleansing himself was enchanting. Beautiful. ♥

I kind of wish Puck did fill in the male vocals with Kurt on "Baby It's Cold Outside". That would've been a bit OOC but EPIC. :P

I hope you write more, soon!

[xallegedlyx]

Puck should've starting singing, it's true. would've been great. but i never really had him pegged as a bursting-into-song type. then again, you never know.

Thank you! I'm loving all this positive feedback.

[ruggerdavey]

OH, wow, this was really good. Reflective and a nice view of Puck's character, and I really enjoyed the flow of the piece.

[xallegedlyx]

thank you very much. getting feedback like this just makes my day!

[gleeker13]

Me likey :) I love the ending too. It was one of the types of endings that was ambiguous but not annoyingly so (like this stupid story I read in school last year called 'The Lady or The Tiger'. I HATE NOT KNOWING WHICH DOOR SHE SENT HIM TO!!!). I like the descriptions you have too. Please post more, I have a feeling you'll soon become one of my favorites here.

Next time I have to run for PE I will so have this in my mind...at least until I make my mind shut up and concentrate on regualting my breathing. Which was another thing I loved about this. The reason I don't mind running (other than the fact that I'm fairly good at it compared to others in my class) is that its great for just zoning out and not really thinking. Which is exactly what you captured in this story. Oh, and of course Confused!Puck.

[gleeker13]

And sorry for the babbling. Its just so fun tlaking <3

[xallegedlyx]

don't apologize! i love long comments! Look - I will write one back!

I usually hate ambiguous endings too. I just was writing this and actually planning to continue then decided this was a good place to stop. it was going to be happy ending. don't want to ruin it for you, but i'm a huge sucker for the happy endings.

The funny thing is, i HATE running. detest it. want to shoot myself every time i have to do it. the best part of graduating high school was no more PE ever again so i never have to run. i can only zone out when i'm doing the bike/spin machine at the gym.

Thank you! I'll def be writing more. i always am, just never posting. that's what always happens. Comments like yours motivate me though. <3

[xallegedlyx]

thank you! working on it.

[xallegedlyx]

Thank you! I'm flattered.